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The Monarchy of Red

 
AlaskaEverfall Saturday, 12 June 2010
I like ur style of writing...
but i couldn't quite figure out what you were writing about, and y u were writing about it... =P
I suggest, instead of concentrating on ur writing, (2 add descriptive words), instead, make sure that the reader can actually understand wat ur trying 2 express.... =P
Good work! XD
Rhose Whyte

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