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Sound Of Silence

 
J.D. Roth Monday, 11 April 2016
You did a great job with writing this. You paint one hell of a picture and I feel as though I'm watching a movie while reading this. If you get the chance, please take a look at what I've recently posted, the first four chapters of my full MS entitled "Fear the Reaper". Thank you and keep at it!
 
MicJagguar Sunday, 10 March 2013
This is beautifully written! It's very interesting and I definitely want to read more! So, I will do just that. I will read more. :)
 
KCNiemi Tuesday, 26 February 2013
This is really good! I'm new to the site and would greatly appreciate your feedback on one of my novels(all of which are incomplete). Thanks :)
 
Steven Cash Tuesday, 27 March 2012
I haven't read it all yet, but I will most definitely. I think its a good premise, BEAST prologue... or 1st chapter, whatever you call it.

PLEASE, PLEASE Read mine! I'm new to WOP and I just uploaded my book. I don't want to seem like I am spamming, but I need some feedback so I can know if I should go on or not. I think you're an amazing author, and your feedback would be appreciated...
PEACE
Loz Saturday, 19 February 2011
OMG my heart was in my mouth, what a fab opening.
 
Il diva Tuesday, 28 December 2010
Brilliant great opening
 
TamaraLM Saturday, 25 December 2010
Fabulous start! I'm not going to stop reading this.
 
Ilyaas Khaja Thursday, 15 January 2009
one word...wow. Your writing style is impeccable and your storytelling is flawless. You've managed to hook me and now I am obsessed over nothing else apart from this book. Rarely have I ever been so captivated by a book on this website - but this one has done the trick! It reminds me of Scream 2, the way a bloody figure walks in with a knife sticking out of their chest. But I had to be VERY analytical to come to that. UNIQUELY FANTASTIC! FIVE STARS!

P.S. Please read, comment and rate my novel. I need experts like you to look at my novel. Thanks!
 
kiwi_Tracey Friday, 7 November 2008
I am hooked and ready to read the next chapter.

Tracey
 
Janey Thursday, 6 November 2008
Fabulous writing! My favorite genre and a captivating story line! My congratulations and best wishes to Ms. Hala.
 
MarieChristine Thursday, 6 November 2008
Great start, Got my attention with just a few paragraphs. Will be reading on, glad I found it.
 
Susan M. Wednesday, 5 November 2008
I'm hooked. This story gets right into the action. Can't wait to see what happens next and to learn more about the characters.
Rosie Tuesday, 4 November 2008
This story is great, really grabs you. Waiting for next chapters.
Rosie
 
MicJagguar Sunday, 10 March 2013
This is fantastic, really. Also, you seem very knowledgeable on the subject! You must've done a lot of research! Excellent work! Amazing story so far :D
 
Il diva Tuesday, 28 December 2010
Just gets better
 
B.J Roberts Thursday, 20 May 2010
I love this now. And if this gets published, i'll be one of the ones who buys it.
 
B.J Roberts Thursday, 20 May 2010
I love this now. And if this gets published, i'll be one of the ones who buys it.
 
kiwi_Tracey Friday, 7 November 2008
That was quite an emotional chapter for the band and you can really see there personalities starting to come out. Makes me want to read on.
 
Tammy L Gard Tuesday, 4 November 2008
This is wicked. Looking forward to the next chapter...
DinaDivas Tuesday, 4 November 2008
Interesting"'
" Wait for.. Next Chapter
 
Il diva Tuesday, 28 December 2010
can't stop reading it
 
kiwi_Tracey Friday, 7 November 2008
I am on the edge of my seat hoping Samuel is OK. This story is addictive.
 
Il diva Tuesday, 28 December 2010
Bedime I think not!
 
Il diva Tuesday, 28 December 2010
so good should be a best seller
 
by the sea Friday, 7 November 2008
Great momentum and it really keeps your interest. Very enjoyable.
 
kiwi_Tracey Friday, 7 November 2008
What a brilliant storyline. I keep reading the synopsis and I can't wait for the next chapter where the bands plane is sabotaged. Keep up the awesome work Rose.
suegeo Thursday, 6 November 2008
This is a fantastic story, by a brilliant author, I look forward to reading further chapters.

Sue
 
abokee Thursday, 6 November 2008
this book's got me on the edge of my seat. ms hala sure knows how to keep me in suspense. bring on the next chapter! i'm eagerly anticipating it. =)
 
loveofwriting Thursday, 30 June 2011
this is such a thrilling story that makes me question whats going to happen! I love it :D
 
RobynnNinjah Monday, 28 March 2011
I.CANT.STOP.READING!
sweet jesus this is MARVELOUS!
AMMAZING!! LOVELOVELOVE!
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
fantastic love it
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
Tense and exciting! well done Rose
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
oh love those choirboys!
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
great
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
Brilliant I want more
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
Rose you know how to write a great novel
 
Kazza Sunday, 9 November 2008
This story is getting better with each chapter ...well done Rose
 
fear-me Sunday, 9 November 2008
kool
 
Jacob Sunday, 9 November 2008
Nice.
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
love this
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
what happens next...........
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
will they find the culprit?
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
a wonderl read couldn't put it down
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
cool
Rosie Wednesday, 12 November 2008
Great story teller.
Rosie
 
Kazza Monday, 10 November 2008
wow ... some good writing here Rose,...can't wait for the next chapters.
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
the suspense is killing me!
Rosie Wednesday, 12 November 2008
Love it so far, getting better and better.
Rosie
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
brill
Rosie Wednesday, 12 November 2008
Great story.
Rosie
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
love the twists and turns
Rosie Wednesday, 12 November 2008
Wonderful story, exciting and adventureous. Please continue
 
Il diva Friday, 31 December 2010
Pulsating from start to finsh highly recommended
 
Kazza Saturday, 13 December 2008
Rose
i can't wait for the next chapter, great work
luv kazza

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