I'm Still Here

bexielouisee Friday, 31 August 2012
This is really good :)
katiealyssa. Tuesday, 8 June 2010
I like this. (: I love the last line expecially. It could flow a little better by having the same amount of syllables in a line. This is very good though. (:
Shannon K. Wednesday, 12 May 2010
My life has started to take a turn from where my mom was the adult when I was little, and now she acts so immature... She really is crazy though. That's the difference.

I like this anyway. Nice job. The thoughts are well organized.
Black Whispers Tuesday, 11 May 2010
hum... can't decide wether or not i likey.. :S :D
K. LiCausi Sunday, 4 November 2012
You are a fantastic poet! I'm usually not one for poems {Roses are red, Violets are Blue, boo hoo hoo}, but I love both of these! They're so raw and intimate! They're those emotional, tear-jerking poems that make you feel like your heart has fallen through your feet. Maybe that's just me. But seriously, amazing! :)
dreamer6382 Monday, 13 August 2012
I think you did rather well with both poems. I like yopur work. You know who this is.
Nadia Lino Saturday, 28 August 2010
your poems are so filled with emotions you can tell your a natrul writer:D
Angelena Fox-Francisco Thursday, 19 August 2010
hmm... poetic and if I'm correct, these are poems, right? Cool! I write poems, too, but I don't like writing them as much as stories. You did a good job! Great messages and amazingly powerful

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