Comments
Ocean Girl

E. N. Antonucci Tuesday, 17 January 2012
No offence but this book was not well writen. I don't know how much you like to write but I know enough that you do not like to write often because you have no quotation marks over anything anyone said and I'm pretty sure no one would have a sleepover with a person you just met. Anyway maybe consider revising. And after someone is done talking skip a line and start over. Sorry but it was really bad. But hey comments like this only makes the writers stronger.
Listen to my words.
READ MY BOOK:
Dear Diary
 
Elizabeth Ramsey Sunday, 22 November 2009
Like the story so far, but please put dialogue in quotes. It's a pet peave of mine. I'd love it if you could read and review my book too. Keep up the good work.

-Elizabeth
 
Sunny Bunny Florida Friday, 12 March 2010
Good book:). Could you read and comment some of mine? Thanks

Back to book