Ocean Girl

E. N. Antonucci Tuesday, 17 January 2012
No offence but this book was not well writen. I don't know how much you like to write but I know enough that you do not like to write often because you have no quotation marks over anything anyone said and I'm pretty sure no one would have a sleepover with a person you just met. Anyway maybe consider revising. And after someone is done talking skip a line and start over. Sorry but it was really bad. But hey comments like this only makes the writers stronger.
Listen to my words.
Dear Diary
Elizabeth Ramsey Sunday, 22 November 2009
Like the story so far, but please put dialogue in quotes. It's a pet peave of mine. I'd love it if you could read and review my book too. Keep up the good work.

Sunny Bunny Florida Friday, 12 March 2010
Good book:). Could you read and comment some of mine? Thanks

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