magicalwriter16 Monday, 26 September 2011
I enjoyed reading so far I will gladly read your other book! If you don't mind could you check out my book. It's called the blind man's cave.
Thanks and good luck your a great writer!
Sharpie(: Monday, 12 September 2011
Amazing! Just that's all I can say.. Amazing!
Angie0808 Tuesday, 28 June 2011
wow this is a great bk so far:)
im def. gonna finish reading this...
its rlly awesome!
Spindlegal Wednesday, 22 December 2010
nice so far. It is a lot to take in for the first chapter since we know nothing about these characters yet, but I think it's got potential. :))
*britts-NAY* Sunday, 19 September 2010
I like it so far. Although there seemed to be a lot happening and not enough explanation, I also think you have an amazing way of describing things, and so I hope your next chapter is a little less confusing.

I can see why this is on the highest rated list, and I'll definitely read more :)
katconwell Saturday, 31 July 2010
Wow. This is really good. And different :)
It's refreshing.
And also, not good at writing in third person, my ass!
hah, I think, so far. You're an excellent writer, no matter what perspective :)
sweetpea Saturday, 31 July 2010
wow, i really think i'm going to like this!

please read/rate my new book?

i added it to my favorites.
Queen Steiny Friday, 30 July 2010
wowzerz i like it, its different :)
Whisper in the Night Wednesday, 28 July 2010
congrats on getting featured ;)
Juliette LaBelle Friday, 4 June 2010
Very impressive. I enjoy reading your work. Please read mine ~puppy dog pout~ and share your ideas?
authorella Friday, 16 April 2010
Holy shit. You are actually a brilliant writer for your ages; do you know how good you are? (Excuse my french!)I could never write as good as that in what will be a thoroughly unambitious life now that I've read your prologue and want to hack up all my shitty prose...
Frost White Saturday, 3 April 2010
VERY nice. The descriptions are unbelievable, although yes, admittedly I am fonder of Cold Water. We'll see how this goes! I'll be looking for your name on the bookshelves soon, I think.
cute4eva Saturday, 12 December 2009
wat IS he?
CM Velez Friday, 13 November 2009
I honestly don't know what to say, but that I love it so far. I mean, maybe you feel that you aren't exactly in your comfort zone, per se, but it definately seems to fit:) Keep writing.

Briley Tuesday, 10 November 2009
You did a great job in descriptions and I think the prologue was done perfectly. It was clear enough for me to want to read, even though I wasn't comletely sure what was going on. This was jut enough to make me want to read more. I'm sorry to say, but I have zero suggestions for you. I think this was done beautifully. And thanks for your comment on my story. I have a huge imaginatinon, but description is not my strong point. Obviously it's yours though. :)
Great job.

And just so you know, if you keep writing like this and working hard, you will fullfill and dreams you possibly have. (I read your profile.)
Mira Rose Friday, 23 October 2009
I do love your descriptions of everyone; they never were my strength. I shall read the rest during school tomorrow.

The font is cool, isn't it? It's something starting with a "tr"; I often type with it now. :)
Thorn Angel Monday, 12 October 2009
Love it love it love it....btw did u c the edited version of Simon on Magica??
H. Thursday, 8 October 2009
I think this is great :)
Well-written, very dramatic, my kind of story. I love depressing stuff (I'm not that messed up though).

Not to be annoying, but could you possibly look at one of mine? That would make my day. Thanks so much.
AnnmarieM Wednesday, 16 September 2009
Tess Kiely: Don't worry, that's the whole purpose of the prologue. It's an exerpt from the end of the book and is meant to confuse you :)

Lollie: Thanks!

Amy Liz: haha! Nice one ;) And thanks

Cam: Aww shucks *lol* Thank you :)

Margaret Wind: Thanks!
Tess Kiely Wednesday, 16 September 2009
I just read the prologue and I'm extremely confused (am I supposed to, or am I just slow? Hope it's the first! :D) but it seems good, and I really like it!
Lollie Tuesday, 15 September 2009
Great stuff, i really like the intro. I can't wait to read more
A.E. Eidem Tuesday, 15 September 2009
That was good. I really liked it, and you have me wanting more. Great job!
Cam Monday, 14 September 2009
Your posting/writing more! Yay :)
That was incredible, like your other work. And it isn't terrible; it's terrific, Annmarie. So don't be so modest about it! :L

adfkjhjklfds Monday, 14 September 2009
I really like it! It drew me in right away :D Great job.

PS. Could you read (and rate) my story, Huntress? Thanks!
Flower. Monday, 14 September 2009
I like it. It instantly drew me in, and I like how the boy or ghost, or whatever that took over seans body is descibed as his friend, not his enemy. I also really like your desciption 'Shadows grinned maliciously and licked at the floor, waltzing in time to the flickering street lights just across the road.'
And I hope you keep working on it.

Soul Monday, 3 September 2012
I like this a lot. Really angsty! In my head I'm yelling. 'No, you're fine! Don't do it!' I like stories that I can see in my head, and yours meets this requirement. A suggestion: Put the weight in stones (10 stone 2 pounds) and then add some light calculating on her part, to convert the amount to 142 pounds. It sounds American as is. 1.6 metres?, uh, conversion site, here I come. Sheesh I really need to memorize these.
Keep writing!
Polaris Zark Wednesday, 17 August 2011
You're so good, you put me off my own writing.
Roonil Wazlib Tuesday, 5 October 2010
I like this alot. Allie seems alot like me to be honsest only I'm not anorexic or fancy my best friend. really good.
Capitalletters Tuesday, 27 July 2010
Youíre not afraid of letting your creative juices flowing while your personality really comes out with your writing. You have a really nice style of writing - very professional and understanding.
Well done and mind reading mine? : )
authorella Friday, 16 April 2010
Allie's not annoying. I think she's just like a lot of girls these days. But I really love this story so far :) It's one I would pick up off a shelf and read.
Charley Fletcher Thursday, 18 March 2010
this is good! Write more!

And can anyone check out mine please? I need opinions like a cat needs to chase a mouse!
*sara* Tuesday, 29 December 2009
so far the blurb matches nothing that is writtten hear isnt the guy supposed to die??
Nick Sunday, 20 December 2009
I have nothing to say about your style. It's incredibly good. As far as I saw, the only problem present is the one you mentioned at the bottom of your prologue. The whole story feels pretty unfocused, although I'm sure that comes from it being hastily written without much editing or planning. For example, the first page was a little confusing, but I can accept that, as most authors like to start by raising questions and subsequently answering them. Chapter two was all over the place. You went from making me feel like you were going to unravel some mystery to forcing me to listen to a girl complain about her weight. Too big a transition too fast. Also try and keep your point of view consistent; you jumped characters in the middle of a paragraph and that momentarily bewildered me.

Good job overall. It was fun to read. And it doesn't surprise me that you find my book familiar sounding. You've read 1984!
Cam Sunday, 20 September 2009
Again, great. What can I say?
And yeah, I guess wolves will be the next one up :) I'm really shocked that mine made it to the featured book :O Anyway, keep on writing this. It really is great.
Tess Kiely Wednesday, 16 September 2009
Wow that was amazing! Please write more soon!
A.E. Eidem Tuesday, 15 September 2009
Wow that was really good glad I took the time to read it.
Currently listening to: the sound of the my fingers pressing against the keyboard.
Polaris Zark Friday, 19 August 2011
I enjoyed reading this. It's very inspirational.
Mary-Annalee DiGiovanni Thursday, 30 December 2010
Nice writing so far, but i feel there are elements not sure exactly what though. i hate to say that and then not give specifics, but im guessing it might be the fact that i cant picture your characters very well...maybe some description of scenery..internal needs just a little bit more.
Mark Gutierrez Saturday, 31 July 2010
its really great. your writing is alot of fun to read. I hope you like this as much as I do, and that inspiration keeps coming through. Good luck!
*sara* Tuesday, 29 December 2009
ohhh so know he dies i get it i get it ignore my first comment!!
A.E. Eidem Tuesday, 22 September 2009
Once again, it is really good! I love it.
Flower. Monday, 21 September 2009
I really like this. I think I said that before? Anyway, update soon,! I love it! XD
Currently listening to: The strange rustling outside my window.
Also, I've added to 'Wolves." I wish I was as confident in it getting featured as you and Cam seem to be. :P
Flower. Monday, 21 September 2009
I really like this. I think I said that before? Anyway, update soon,! I love it! XD
Currently listening to: The strange rustling outside my window.
Also, I've added to 'Wolves." I wish I was as confident in it getting featured as you and Cam seem to be. :P
Polaris Zark Friday, 19 August 2011
Freaky... you are an awesome writer.
PottermoreDreamer Friday, 1 July 2011
This is incredible.
Your style of writing is brilliant. Pure genius.
harrypotterluver Friday, 1 July 2011
i love this book!!! ahhh and i know what you mean about feeling like scenes are rushed i feel like that sometimes too when I write but i thought this was the perfect length, also would you mind checking out my book "Human"?:)
Roonil Wazlib Tuesday, 5 October 2010
why is everyone else so confused? I'm not. I'm not trying to boast. Btw I love this book and I like the stlye it is written in.
EllyKay Friday, 30 July 2010
I like it check out my book? Dreamland: Kidnapped
AnnmarieM Sunday, 3 January 2010
Right, I know I know, everyone is confused. But, do not fret! Everything IS explained in chapter 5, so please bear with me :)
*sara* Tuesday, 29 December 2009
so very confused that it hurts my head
cute4eva Saturday, 12 December 2009
ummm ... i dont get wat is going on :(
AS Friday, 6 November 2009
WOW!!! Are you trying to kill us here, your great writing skills leaving us hanging, not on one fabulous book, but two absolutely, breath-taking damn great books. SHEESH!
I agree with boo! Fabulous!
i.c.u Thursday, 5 November 2009
omg u rite this?
after u commented my book i was like, hmmmm i wonder what books she has written, than i found out it was this and i was like WHOAAAH! i love this book (= and what amazes me is i absolutley loooove cold water (=
thnxx so much for my comment i was losing hope after about three days when no one commented than all of a sudden all these people (well like 4 but thats alot (= thnxxx soooo much and i looooooovvvvvveeeee ur books (great idea (=
Erika Friday, 9 October 2009
This is wicked good! I am sorta confused right now but I am sure that it will add up. Good Job WRITE MORE SOON! :)
Delphinia Fuller Monday, 10 September 2012
I'm impressed with your writing abilities!! I'm excited to see what happens next!!! you are very talented!!!
ThisChick21 Wednesday, 24 August 2011
AMAZING story UHMAZING! I love love love it really! :DD
Kalifornia Gurl Wednesday, 24 August 2011
OMG you are one amazing writing girl! Love this story :DD
Polaris Zark Friday, 19 August 2011
This is good. I enjoy light horror fantasies like this. It reminds me of the book 'Nobody True', by a certain James Herbert, or something along the lines. I'm looking forward to the next instalment!
Flame Sunday, 5 September 2010
this book is amazing i love it i would TOTALLY BUY IT!!!!!!!!! if it were published i would recomend it to ALL my friends
Eunice G:) Tuesday, 20 April 2010
this is SO good :D
Pleasepleaseplease write more!
And thanks for the cyber-space cookies...yum :D
Heather M. Sunday, 31 January 2010
Great! I need more... Check out Truth Unspoken?
Jessica Lyal Tuesday, 5 January 2010
I really like this! I love how you started it off somewhat sonfusing. It made me want to read more, and eventually, I realized what was going on. This is AMAZING! Good job.

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