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Angel in the Maze

 
Si Coote Wednesday, 2 April 2008
Its very well writtten, 3Jane, and some great care has been taken in editing, well done. I've only read the 1st couple of chapters but, to me, your descriptive writing is your strong point. A little more of this, like scene-setting, and less incidental dialogue would make it more interesting for me, but that's just me! What's your take on mine, 3Jane?

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