Battle Royale

TheNovelReader Monday, 18 February 2019
Your writing is mediocre at best. I checked out some of your other postings and I notice that your concepts are good. But you really need to stop with the questions in your descriptions. "Who will win? Who will lose?" Will love prevail? Etc. It is really off putting. Refrain from that because no one wants nor needs to be asked those questions. It is as if your addressing children. We dont need you to break it down like that.
Taboo Tales Friday, 8 February 2019
wow! this concept is so interesting! and Riona is a fishing cat c: I dont know if that was on purpose but I love it! just read the first fight! the flamingo winning was quite unexpected! I like it a lot man, you got some real talent! ooo!! And fishing cat wins c: I thought he might! he is a very speedy Cat I must say x3 please please update soon! I really am enjoying this story! please update soon, cant wait to see what happens next! keep up the AWESOME WORK!!!!
J.D. Brown, Hexagames CEO Wednesday, 10 April 2019
This is a rather unique and fun concept for a story. The telling from the POV's per character is helpful and your story structure is solid. More details and emotions would help, and I'm VERY interested in some backstory! (Maybe a prequel?) Never stop writing; I look forward to more!
Taboo Tales Friday, 15 February 2019
wow! that was intense. I liked them a lot as well

Yesss love it so much! keep going with the amazing work !!! you are destined for greatness my friend c:


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