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Instant Cambodia

 
Evan L. Thursday, 12 November 2009
i like it a lot! It's more modern, like how people would sorta really act. my only concern is that you dont exactly describe certain things, like the people, or exactly whats going on, time period, etc. I like the idea, but ill keep reading to see its potential as a book, because it sounds like a great short story for now, so i cant wait to see what suspence/surprises could make it into a book!!! BTW, if you didn't know, your book was one of the RANDOM BOOK things at the first page... thats how i found it. nice job, keep it up, and ill keep reading!!! Also, would you mind checking mine out? thanks a ton,

Evan
 
J.M.P.Lutz Thursday, 9 July 2009
It is pretty good right now. I've read about half and although things need to be changed, it is turning out to be a great story. Keep writing and if you get a chance, could you read mine?

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