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Don't Tell Anyone We Kissed (Book 1) - COMPLETED

Strawberry Saturday, 7 June 2014
I like this book its realistic and not overboard. On my way to Book two.
 
nattpugh Monday, 11 July 2016
love this book, constantly re-read it!
LilySHORTY55 Saturday, 23 January 2016
I love this book so much. My friend and I just made our accounts Today because my cousin is writing a book, I went and read hers but now Im interested in reading more. Way to go!
 
Wall Hermitt Friday, 1 January 2016
ps

It's well-written!
 
Wall Hermitt Friday, 1 January 2016
I've always found romance fascinating; it's always been a favorite genre of mine. A twist such as this one under this genre is therefore something great to get into, seeing as I never before did. Thanks for sharing this!
 
Jezzyboo Friday, 13 June 2014
this is interesting. ill keeping reading to see if I like it (:
 
sabrinaspivey Wednesday, 18 September 2013
I agree with IAMSHERLOCKED. Incest is gross. But this is like addicting. Ive only read this so far. But its great. Not like nasty incest at all. PERFECT. Love it
 
Rae14 Thursday, 30 May 2013
Awesome
 
KCNiemi Saturday, 23 February 2013
This is really good!You hook the reader right from the start! I would love to get your opinion on one of my novels :)
IAMSHERLOCKED Tuesday, 12 February 2013
I can't believe that people actually find this entertaining. THIS IS INCEST!!!! does anyone else find this disgusting? seriously.
FlamingSnowflake Friday, 18 January 2013
Great, just wonderful :) Since you put book one, I can only assume there will be another one. :) Fantastic so far.
 
jjtangster Monday, 14 January 2013
Great writing!
 
black fire night Sunday, 9 December 2012
I like it I think its interesting I like the plot to it too :) amd if you don't mind but please visit my books thay can help you find love so stop reading about love experience it for you self and let somebody else reading your story. So please visit my user name is Ravenlight and I hope love come for you all soon :)
 
Cal Thursday, 27 September 2012
The first paragraph is kind of awkward... If you dont mind me saying... I love the story though. You really got me interested!
 
MonteCarlo90 Monday, 6 August 2012
I'm really liking this.
 
Kee-Kee1996 Thursday, 26 July 2012
You have a lot of guts for writing a story like this... and I respect you for it. I love the way he still had brotherly love for her but also a little more. I'm not going to lie this story kind of freaks me out, but I'm interested.
 
AlaskaEverfall Sunday, 27 May 2012
Love your plot! :D Amazing work with the dialogue!
fightthegoodfight Wednesday, 16 May 2012
are they really brother ans sis or step?
 
barbie24 Saturday, 28 April 2012
So far its cute.
 
LavelyMaffins Monday, 23 April 2012
I really like this story! Its is the best I have seen so far and is really interesting. I have just started writing stories and I was just wondering if you could read mine and give me some tips!!!
 
LoveStories96 Monday, 9 January 2012
Amazing story :) PLease rate my books. i need some feedback
 
karkar123 Saturday, 7 January 2012
That's awesome is rated it 5 star's plase rate my book :D
osnapitzshaina Tuesday, 27 December 2011
amazing
aimee x Sunday, 25 December 2011
this book is well good,i got recomended to
it and its brill!
 
Liam Rae Saturday, 17 December 2011
Short ass chapter but its coo. I'll read more eventually
 
Kathleen Paddock Tuesday, 6 September 2011
This is amazing! I can't believe the idea! It is amazing and SO well written! Just a suggestion: You should not have so much swearing in your books. It's great! Just a little less swearing. :)
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
Wow, this is a pretty good story. I love Ethan already. Keep writing(:
 
Katarena Rae Sunday, 29 May 2011
i rlly like this. o-o
Jessica Penn Wednesday, 11 May 2011
I'm so confused at the moment as to why there are so many stories about incest on here at the moment...
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 6 April 2011
This is so cute! I love it so far, the dialogue is really good.
 
Maddiee*xo Thursday, 24 February 2011
awwwwww i love this SO much, please please keep writing, it's amazing! <3
Kathrinelouseal19 Sunday, 13 February 2011
Wait...are they like blood brother and sister???
Hatewish Friday, 11 February 2011
thanks roza! :) hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters.
 
*Roza* Thursday, 10 February 2011
Cute! Love how he's so sweet and protective!
 
Julie-Chan Wednesday, 9 February 2011
this is one hot book, its cute too on how sweet ethan is.
 
loveemocolor Tuesday, 10 March 2015
I get that he is her bro and all but you should never have to ask your brother for permission to see someone
 
Kee-Kee1996 Thursday, 26 July 2012
I love it.
 
barbie24 Saturday, 28 April 2012
Why would she ask his permission to see this guy?
 
sunshinedrops Monday, 17 October 2011
This a good book. But like really strange. Are they blood related?
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
TELL ME, I NEED TO KNOW. ARE THEY BLOOD RELATED?
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
This is really good so far...
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 11 May 2011
Are they blood related or like step siblings?
Loving this so far!
 
loveemocolor Tuesday, 10 March 2015
Lol Lexi didn't want him with clair
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
So adorable, Lexi (=
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
So adorable, Lexi (=
virincci Thursday, 2 June 2011
Why couldn't you make the guy her cousin?
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 6 April 2011
Awwwwww. She's jealous.
IAMSHERLOCKED Tuesday, 12 February 2013
THIS BOOK IS NOT SWEET OR CUTE, IT IS FREAKIN INCEST!!!!!!
 
Savhannah Daniels Monday, 30 May 2011
OMG!!! This story is soo addicting I love it!!!! <3 on to the next chapter!!! :)
 
UndeadBeauty Monday, 25 April 2011
WHOA! The suspense is KILLING me! Imma keep reading this! It's awesome! I love love love it!
 
Peace&Love1995 Monday, 14 February 2011
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
Hatewish Saturday, 12 February 2011
thanks kalifornia gurl! :) i'll update the chapters soon.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Saturday, 12 February 2011
Awh this book is sweet!!! And cute! Write more really soon! And keep Posting!:)!!!
 
Kee-Kee1996 Thursday, 26 July 2012
So they are not blood related.. still a hard subject to write on and I like it how you all kept is going
 
sunshinedrops Monday, 17 October 2011
Thank u for not making them blood related!!!!!!
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
You're really really good at writing these kinds of stories. I honestly didn't like your death clock one but this is really good. I don't even normally like these kinds of stories but...its really really good and I like it :D
Life_Lover Sunday, 5 July 2015
this story is so LoL never mind I've been wanting to put my story here but I feel so lazyand
 
Aditya Thursday, 28 July 2011
You make me always think !what next?!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 6 April 2011
LOL at Peace&Love1995's continuous "LOVE LOVE LOVE" comments. Makes me smile wen I see them.
Anyway, great chapter! Keep it up!
 
Peace&Love1995 Saturday, 2 April 2011
LOVE LOVE LOVE! cant wait for more
 
Savhannah Daniels Monday, 30 May 2011
Still loving the story!
 
UndeadBeauty Monday, 25 April 2011
Omigod! *stares*
 
homewrecker:) Monday, 4 April 2011
i want more i cant wait to read more
 
Peace&Love1995 Monday, 4 April 2011
LOVE!!!!
kmkraemer121 Tuesday, 5 April 2011
this is amazing! Post more!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Monday, 4 April 2011
LOVE IT! Post more!
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 11 May 2011
My heart is hammering from the entensity of this book!
Hatewish Wednesday, 6 April 2011
The dialogue is continued on the next chapter. :)
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 6 April 2011
"I'm" what?????
 
Karen Juno Friday, 1 June 2012
awesome i <3 it
 
AddyB1 Thursday, 7 July 2011
I
LOVE
THIS
!!!
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
Such...awesome...book...can't...stop...reading!!1
 
Savhannah Daniels Monday, 30 May 2011
AMAZING!!!
 
UndeadBeauty Monday, 25 April 2011
OMIGOD! THIS IS AWESOME! I love the detail! I can't wait till this is published in real life!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 6 April 2011
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
 
homewrecker:) Wednesday, 6 April 2011
i agree with Kalifornia Gurl
Write more
 
Kalifornia Gurl Tuesday, 5 April 2011
Awh! How cute! PLEASE POST MORE!
 
D.E. Boyd Tuesday, 30 July 2013
cannot stop reading, so addicted!! xxx
 
Abby Vandiver Saturday, 21 July 2012
It is amazing. The book is excellent. I didn't think I would like it because I didn't realize at first the were not related by blood. Very good writing, very good story, very good book.
 
Gigi215 Saturday, 2 July 2011
Awww, Ethan is so sweet!!! :D and don't ask me why but everytime I'm reading this story, the song Nothing by The Script plays in my head. If you guys have never heard it, check it out :D LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS BOOK!!! IT'S SO AWESOMESAUCE!!! :D
Na<3mi B. Monday, 2 May 2011
I just thanked gawd when you explained that they weren't blood related. haha Great book though!
 
cindyvoll Thursday, 7 April 2011
Thanks, for this very interesting story. I love it.
Hatewish Wednesday, 6 April 2011
thanks so much for loving it! :D
 
*Roza* Wednesday, 6 April 2011
This is so sweet. I love how honest they both are with each other. In most romances, the people never say what they MEAN, ya know? But I like this. No, scratch that, I LOVE this. Have I mentiond that?
 
*Roza* Wednesday, 6 April 2011
Cute! I love it! And I LOVE your story too. It's amazing!!!
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
So her and ethen are together now yassssssssssss!!!!!!!
 
Kee-Kee1996 Thursday, 26 July 2012
Irvine so hot!!!
 
ME!!! Wednesday, 28 March 2012
OMG HE is adorable and I never want to stop reading!
 
tokiohotelfan Wednesday, 18 January 2012
YAY! THEY'RE TOGETHER!
 
AlexH Monday, 2 January 2012
I love this story and it's characters
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 25 May 2011
I wish to meet this boy in real life! Im in love! WITH A FICTIONAL CHARACTER!!!!!
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
Omg! I love him! He is so cute and funny!!!!!!
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
Yea!!!!suspence!!!!!I LOVE it!!!!! Lips!!!
 
Aidachi Saturday, 16 April 2011
SO awesome it ain't even funny. Love this book. I'm addicted :)
 
Elena Hathaway Sunday, 10 April 2011
Cute!
 
ShaqD Friday, 8 April 2011
I'm really liking this story. Can't wait for more!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 7 April 2011
Love it post more!! Btw I freakin' love Irvine! He's like F**kin' hillarious
 
Elena Hathaway Sunday, 10 April 2011
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! POST MORE! Please.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Saturday, 9 April 2011
LOVE! post more
 
Jace Parker Thursday, 10 March 2016
good book
 
Rae14 Sunday, 14 July 2013
Haha princess in shining armor!!!
 
Rae14 Sunday, 14 July 2013
Haha princess in shining armor!!!
 
Rae14 Sunday, 14 July 2013
Haha princess in shining armor!!!
Kris Edwards Monday, 7 May 2012
I love Irvine!!!! And I think he just might have a crush on Lexi. Call me crazy but it's a hunch I have.
 
AlexH Monday, 2 January 2012
I think i love Irvine more than Ethan lol
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 11 May 2011
Okay, its official. I love Irvine
 
Kalifornia Gurl Wednesday, 13 April 2011
more PLZ!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 13 April 2011
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That is simply all there is to say.
-D
 
Peace&Love1995 Wednesday, 13 April 2011
love, love ,love!!(=
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
Ethan is being unloyal to Lexi but he is still my favorite character ;)
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 11 May 2011
Hahahahahaha!
"Go out with me?"
"NO!"
Made me chuckle XD
Na<3mi B. Tuesday, 3 May 2011
I enjoy the carry on dialogue. It's nice. :3
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 14 April 2011
I think she should get married and have little baby Jaycees! They would probably b super cute! And Ethan probably doesn't like her that much or isn't very loyal cuz like u said he's more than likely having his OWN fun! So yeahh
Hatewish Thursday, 14 April 2011
Hahaha, oh well. :p It's probably just girl instinct... I mean, who knows? Ethan must be having a little fun on his own. HOHO ~
 
Elena Hathaway Thursday, 14 April 2011
I'm starting to have mixed feelings about little Lexi. But I still love this story! At least she's staying true to Ethan. -D
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
Omg she sounds like she is gonna rape him. If I were him I would've said "if you don't leave me the fu**k alone you thirsty whore
 
LivnaRose Tuesday, 24 July 2012
If I were Ethan (or a guy for that matter) I would have just said, "B*tch, get off my d*ck" lol. Geez, he really is a nice guy. Catherine sucks xp
 
sweet-lover Wednesday, 1 June 2011
its so intersting
Hatewish Friday, 15 April 2011
AquarianBeauty, actually Lexi and Ethan would 'sneak out' (dates, loveydovey, etc.) as the story progresses.

The recently published chapters are barely half of the whole story. (Heheh~)

Read on, you might find the 'whole' story appealing once all the chapters are published.

SPOILER!!! --> I still have tons of 'twists and turns', and a couple of 'unwanted revelations'.... :))

Enjoy reading, :p

 
JAquarius Friday, 15 April 2011
I Love the story, Kind of wish it was between blood brother and sister b/c it would make it more of a taboo and not acceptiable which equals to danger and excitement. If it's going to be step brother and sister I would love for Lexi and E to work it out and to date secretly with in the wall of their home... until E goes to college, then the lust and betrayal can begain with Jaycee b/c he looks like a cool person that turns out to be a bad boy and he gets kick out of college and Lexi is there to comfort h
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 14 April 2011
He is cute! I was sooo right!:)
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 14 April 2011
U HAD 2? You to had 2 make me wait for the next chapter?????? DO U NO HOW ABUSIVE THT IS???? POST MORE!!!!!!!!!
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
Girls do not belong in the kitchen wtf!!!
 
Pseudonym Thursday, 6 September 2012
so much for 'Girls belong in the kitchen'! Aha! I love this book!!!
 
Penguin_Luver Friday, 1 June 2012
this is like awesome. i really like it
 
sunshinedrops Tuesday, 18 October 2011
Ok u r a good writer first of all!! And I know this sounds mean but I don't like how alexine can't really do that much for herself. I mean she Is nice but it's kind of sad that she had to have her friend come over to her house to make her dinner because she couldn't do it for her self SPOILER right there.
 
sunshinedrops Tuesday, 18 October 2011
Ok u r a good writer first of all!! And I know this sounds mean but I don't like how alexine can't really do that much for herself. I mean she Is nice but it's kind of sad that she had to have her friend come over to her house to make her dinner because she couldn't do it for her self SPOILER right there.
 
sunshinedrops Tuesday, 18 October 2011
Ok u r a good writer first of all!! And I know this sounds mean but I don't like how alexine can't really do that much for herself. I mean she Is nice but it's kind of sad that she had to have her friend come over to her house to make her dinner because she couldn't do it for her self SPOILER right there.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 15 April 2011
NOT a good writer??? Who the hell told you tht??? Whoever did is a damn idiot anyways, YOU R A GOOD WRITER DUDE! Extermely good! And it is abusive!:) I hope you know that. But like i said u r a good writer and whoever told u; u were a bad writer needs to get their butt out of their ears! POST MORE! :)
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 15 April 2011
WHAT? Of course you're a good writer! I love this book! Would I read it if you're not a good writer? Don't answer that. Anyway, GREAT CHAPTER POST MORE!!!!!!!!!
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
ETHAN+ALEXINE Or IRVINE +ALEXINE

Choose
 
Aidachi Saturday, 16 April 2011
AH! STOP IT WITH THE SHORT CHAPTERS!!!!!! THEY'RE TORTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hatewish Saturday, 16 April 2011
Yeah, darn it. Irvine is so sweet that I'm actually falling inlove with him!!! And I am totally supposed to support EthanxAlexine!!! T__T !! *FAIL*
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 15 April 2011
Awh Vine is sooo sweeet!!! POST MORE Or u can't come 2 the dark side and we have cookies :)
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 15 April 2011
MORE PWEASE!!!!!!
 
Peace&Love1995 Wednesday, 20 April 2011
Hear*Me-- agreed!! love love love
 
Smalltowngirl Wednesday, 20 April 2011
Awhh, why short chapterrss?!
:(
 
Elena Hathaway Tuesday, 19 April 2011
NO FAIR! Why the short chapters, dude? Please write more!!

Oh, and if your pen name has anything to do with the Fang from Maximum Ride, then YOU RULE EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!
 
Zoey Balderston Thursday, 12 May 2011
I agree with Elena, I've always loved Fang, but in FANG and ANGEL he made me quite upset X(
But it's still my favorite series in all the universe
 
Elena Hathaway Thursday, 21 April 2011
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE MAXIMUM RIDE!!! But if you've read the most recent two books, I am very extremely mad at Fang. If you've read FANG and ANGEL, you'll know why. =D
And as for this book, WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US WITH THESE SHORT CHAPTERS???????????? IT'S CRUELTY!!! POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Wednesday, 20 April 2011
But its torture! Short chapters should be illegal! Its sooo addicting!!!!!!!! I want moreee! I should report u 4 abuse! Abuse tht u won't give me more chapterS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Moreee
 
Jace Parker Thursday, 10 March 2016
maximum ride is fucking awesome
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
O_O I think my heart skipped a beat
 
Elise Thursday, 2 June 2011
AH TEAM IRVINE! He is so fine :D
 
Harley Thursday, 26 May 2011
Oh my gosh I think I forgot how to breathe for a minute! :OO
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
lol I despise maximum ride >:)
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
:O omg...I LOVE him!!!!!!!! Lolz!!!!!!
 
Jaye Friday, 20 May 2011
Now I must say TEAM IRVINE!
 
Jaye Friday, 20 May 2011
Witch and Wizard is awesome!
 
Jaye Friday, 20 May 2011
Witch and Wizard is awesome!
 
MaddieBear c: Sunday, 24 April 2011
oh dang!!! sexy!! *mentally whistles* team irvine all the way!!! i likey... lol
Wendy.C Friday, 22 April 2011
DAMB!!!!! HE'S HELLA FINE!! GO TEAM IRVINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Peace&Love1995 Friday, 22 April 2011
sierra likey!!!
 
Peace&Love1995 Friday, 22 April 2011
witches and wizards was pretty good...i have had the second book for a long time i just havent gotten around to reading it haha.

i Love fang too....i havent read angel yet but it is on my list of books
I <3 Maximum ride!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 21 April 2011
Holy Sh*t!!! Ivrine is F**king hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you get this :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Oh ya i went there.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 22 April 2011
DUDE!!!!!!!!!! POST MORRRREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 22 April 2011
YEAH!!!!!!!!! LUVE IT!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 23 April 2011
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!
 
bs<3:) Wednesday, 7 March 2012
im only on chapter 25 and i love it :)
priya Monday, 17 October 2011
it's gud really gud
 
Elise Thursday, 2 June 2011
Irvine should have his chance with xine! (;
 
Katarena Rae Monday, 30 May 2011
im so team irvine. :D
 
Nayeli Wordsworth Friday, 13 May 2011
awh! poor Irvine ;(
 
Zoey Balderston Thursday, 12 May 2011
Oh goodness. He loves her doesnt he!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 23 April 2011
Cute. So, so cute!!!!
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
I wuv it
 
loveemocolor Wednesday, 11 March 2015
I want cheese
 
Elena Hathaway Monday, 25 April 2011
SO PRETTY!!!!!!!!!!!
 
ShaqD Saturday, 23 April 2011
wow. How did you get that image?? amazing.
N.P Saturday, 23 April 2011
thats a pretty picture.
 
YoHoNo Saturday, 23 April 2011
I have loved what I have read thus far, keep up the good work :) Good luck
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 23 April 2011
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am SO agreeing with Kalifornia Gurl here!!! HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 22 April 2011
POST MORREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Pwease?
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 22 April 2011
Its Pweety!
 
Sparkled*Crypt Saturday, 31 December 2011
This is amazing! And I love that song. :D
 
JAquarius Monday, 25 April 2011
I'm for team Ethan... sorry. :) Post more please
 
Elena Hathaway Monday, 25 April 2011
Why must you torture us with these short chapters?
I think I'll cry with you, Kalifornia Gurl. :'( POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emyline Grace Sunday, 24 April 2011
I am in LOVE with this book!! I demand more chapters LoL. I couldn;t stop reading it from the start!!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Sunday, 24 April 2011
POST MORE! Or I'll b verry verrry sad :'( y would anyone want 2 c me cry??
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
I don't like Jaycee >-<
Emyline Grace Tuesday, 26 April 2011
Jaycee can go die in a hole! he is such an Ass!! Where is Ethan when you need him!? And how the hell did he get out of a mandatory Senior meeting?? I hope my questions will be answerd soon. PLEASE I beg of you, WRITE MORE and SOON!
 
JAquarius Tuesday, 26 April 2011
I hate Jaycee as well, this is turning ugly and into a huge mess! Where is the damn love? Ethan is like Edward in my eyes. Team E!! Dying for breaking dawn can't you tell? LOL! Surprised to get this page! *grateful*
 
Elena Hathaway Tuesday, 26 April 2011
Damn. I hate Jaycee. I really do. Please tell me I'm not alone in this.
ANYways--POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Tuesday, 26 April 2011
Ooooo POST MORE
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 27 April 2011
Ha! Luv it!
 
Giver Monday, 5 November 2012
oH MY GOD HOW COULD HE DO THT
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
AHHH!!! I'm wanna kill Jaycee he's eeevil! >-<
 
Zoey Balderston Friday, 13 May 2011
Jaycee can go die! in a hole! with nuns! on fire!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Wednesday, 27 April 2011
I take tht stuff bak about Jaycee! He's a douche! and a man whore and a stocker and a perv! so he's a Danwhorerv! He's so bad I even made a word 4 him! >:( POST MORE! :DD
Emyline Grace Wednesday, 27 April 2011
Jaycee need to go die in a fucking hole!!!! I will stab him throuh the fucking black hole he has for a heart!!! I wanted to see Ethan come in with Jaycee on top of her so he could beat his ass! I can't wait for more!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 27 April 2011
OH--MY--SHIT!!!!!!!!!!! JAYCEE GO FLIPPIN' DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO I'll KILL YOU MYSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHH POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Tuesday, 3 May 2011
EEEEEEEEEH! I love Ethan!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 4 May 2011
AAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEEEHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I hate Jaycee. Gonna kill him with an axe.
 
JAquarius Friday, 29 April 2011
Alex is weak she's pissing me off! He actually laid awake while Ethan was there??? WTF? Just tell mom and dad we fell in love now let us be or get a divorce. Ethan needs to kick Jaycee's ass! Post more before I have a heart attack over here...j/k.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 29 April 2011
why so short chapter?!! I WANT MORE plz?
Emyline Grace Friday, 29 April 2011
I can't belive alex. She needs to choose one guy and tell her mom and stepdad/
 
loveemocolor Thursday, 12 March 2015
Who in the blue fuck texts like that really?!!!
Miss*E Saturday, 7 July 2012
who texts like that?
 
loveemocolor Thursday, 12 March 2015
He is a lil sweetie
Na<3mi B. Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Aww so Cairo's not so bad? Sweet!!
 
Hollystar1011 Wednesday, 4 May 2011
OMG!!!! What did he SEEEEEEE??!?!?!?! Please pleaseplease please post soon. I love this book.
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 4 May 2011
AH! What did he see?????? What is this indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
cindyvoll Sunday, 1 May 2011
Love it, but the chapters are always short.
Emyline Grace Saturday, 30 April 2011
WHAAA! What did he see!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Saturday, 30 April 2011
What it is?
 
loveemocolor Thursday, 12 March 2015
Screw Ethan IRVINE 4LIFE
 
Zombie Queen Thursday, 2 June 2011
Ethan and Jaycee should die so Irvine and Alexine should be together
just kidding (not really)
 
Zoey Balderston Friday, 13 May 2011
I hate to say this... And i know i prolly shouldnt feel this way, Buuutt... i'm actually rooting more for IrvineXAlexine now
Oh i love him
 
iamteamJACE Thursday, 5 May 2011
i LOVE this story and irvine !!!! i want her and ethan 2 be 2gether forever !!!
<3
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 5 May 2011
I LOVE IRVINE!!!!!! He's my second fav! Ethan is my firsty but if you know happens to die in a horrible bus crash, I would Put Irvine as my first ANYWAYS! POST MORE AND SOON
 
Julia Hecate Thursday, 5 May 2011
Each chapter gets me hooked.
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!!!!
Keep writing.(:
 
Elena Hathaway Thursday, 5 May 2011
WOOO-HOOO! Go Irvine! I love him now! (still on Team Ethan, of course), and I hope he kills Jaycee painfully and slowly. ;P Write more!~!~!~!~!~!~!
 
Kayla Beth Thursday, 5 May 2011
awww i love Irvine and i hope he beats the crap outta Jaycee
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I wanna punch Jaycee in the flippin face!!!!! ARGGGGGG
 
Dawn Gray Saturday, 30 July 2011
This is a very well written book. I love the fact that there are different points of view, a blackmailing friend and the secret admirer all mixed in.
 
Harley Thursday, 26 May 2011
They should all gang up on him and totally mob him >:3
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
I think that cairo would be too predictable since it was already said...I don't really wanna mess with your story structuryness but I think it should be Irvine.
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
yea...I agree with zoey!
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Tuesday, 24 May 2011
I hat him so much!! URG!!!!
 
Jaye Friday, 20 May 2011
Cairo's kinda hot...Cairo should do it... or thy should all just jump him...
 
stormdog11 Sunday, 15 May 2011
i think Cario should beat the shit out of Jaycee if not him....Ethan and Ivrine beat the shit out of him!
 
stormdog11 Sunday, 15 May 2011
kill Jaycee...may i be the one to kill him? he's a bastard! but i like Ethan/Alexine together....they're so cute! but i been feeling bad Irvine though! but this is a really good story!
 
Zoey Balderston Friday, 13 May 2011
Cairo and Irvine should do it together! Brotherly Bonding!
 
JAquarius Saturday, 7 May 2011
I think Lexi should be the one to do it, she needs to get some balls. So what if they are siblings by marriage and they are dating...maybe she can tell her mom and her mom already knows and has known then she could get rid of that sack of shit.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 6 May 2011
Okay, I think like Cairo should like find out and he should either tell Ethan or Ivrine. And then someone beats the shit out of Jaycee! :DD But I'm not really sure ya know?
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 6 May 2011
I. Hate. Jaycee. Can I PLEASE KILL HIM????
 
PiercingAngel Thursday, 5 May 2011
poor ethan!! jaycee is just so mean! b*stard!!!
 
Julie-Chan Thursday, 5 May 2011
KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Awwww there were tears in my eyes TEAM IRVINE
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
i am team irvine all the way!
 
Salamandear Wednesday, 18 May 2011
TEAM IRVINE!!
 
Salamandear Wednesday, 18 May 2011
TEAM IRVINE!!
 
Zoey Balderston Friday, 13 May 2011
You have awesome taste in music
And Irvine too XD
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 6 May 2011
I feel stupid. BUT MOREEE I LUV IVRINE, right now Ethan is being douchis and not really doing anything ya know?! But I HATE JAYCEE, He's a complete Jack ass. Anywaysss POST MORE :DD
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 6 May 2011
I LOVE THIS! I might consider changing to Team Irvine. No, i never could, it's impossible. BUT I HOPE HE KICKS JAYCEE'S ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Raquel Marin Friday, 6 May 2011
GAH! JAYCEE IS A DOUCHE! I SAY HE GETS HUNG BY HIS BALLS FROM A TREE AND THEN BEATEN WITH A STICK WHILE EVERYONE YELLS "PINATA! PINATA!" D:<
anyway awesome story!!!!! can't wait for more!!!
Taj-Marie Johnson Tuesday, 24 May 2011
I like your idea of hanging Jaycee by his balls .. I really like this book so far i can't stop reading but it breaks my heart that Jaycee is such a dick and is abusing Lexie
 
Jaye Friday, 20 May 2011
I like the Idea...Very evil...
 
Salamandear Wednesday, 18 May 2011
Must...Have...Moree!!!
 
stormdog11 Sunday, 15 May 2011
i agree with Kalifornia Gurl! let's hit the shit out of Jaycee!
 
shelby 123 Friday, 13 May 2011
I hate Jaycee!! But I wish that Lexi and Ethan could be together for real it would so cute. An irvine Is a great friend! :) that's the kind of friend every girl needs:)
Emyline Grace Wednesday, 11 May 2011
I cant stop reading the book!! It is SOOO good!
 
JAquarius Monday, 9 May 2011
I love this book I can't wait until their love is exposed, exposed them already!!!
Raquel Marin Saturday, 7 May 2011
hahahaha! I say you should! I say his car breaks down in some ally, then these gang members find him and do that to him :D
 
Kalifornia Gurl Saturday, 7 May 2011
Omg! I would soo want 2 b there and like try too hit the shit out of Jaycee. That would b SO MUCH FUN! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Julie-Chan Saturday, 7 May 2011
yeah i supaaah agree with hear*me. i want his execution to be done publicly though!! pinata in the middle of the schools parking lot!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 7 May 2011
Seriously, do it to Jaycee. He deserves it. I LOVE ETHAN AND LEXI!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
 
donttellanyonewekissedfan Saturday, 8 October 2011
omgggg(:(:(:(:(: illllloooovvvvveeee donttellanyonewekissed(:
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 25 May 2011
luv it!
kk_45 Sunday, 22 May 2011
how come the chapter before this we cant read?
 
stormdog11 Friday, 20 May 2011
Ethan is clueless....shouldn't he at least think she's lying....but so good! post more soon!!!!!!!! :)
Emyline Grace Thursday, 19 May 2011
Oh Ethan! You are so clueless. I say Irv tells Ethan. But I think Jaycee should be on a back of a truck being pulled behind it o fire!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 19 May 2011
MOREE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 18 May 2011
Yay! You added another chapter, finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it, but I HATED HOW SHORT IT WAS. Grrrr. WRITE MORE! Oh, and can you pretty please have Ethan kill Jaycee? Preferably slowly and painfully.
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I vote we hang him by his dick
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Casatrate jaycee
 
Yours 4 Good Wednesday, 12 October 2011
i am a huge fan! but you know what would make this book so interesting? if Jaycee forces Lexi to have sex with him and he has a gun and is arrested! check out my book! its called DARE!
Doomydoomdomm Wednesday, 25 May 2011
this book is exhausting D: my eyes hurt. I need to take a break
 
Zoey Balderston Wednesday, 25 May 2011
Jaycee is such an ass wipe!
just go out with Irvine! Then you no longer have to worry about Jaycee because it is completely acceptable to date Irvine X)
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 25 May 2011
AH! I HATE JAYCEE! MAKE HIM DIE SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY AND IN A CREATIVE WAY! Like chop off his dick first, then his arms, then his legs, then finally his head. Ya dig?
 
Braylee B Friday, 14 October 2011
This book consumed my life all day yesterday. Couldn't stop reading!!! Im hooked!! Its absolutely amazing. Cant wait to keep reading!!! :)
 
Kalifornia Gurl Wednesday, 25 May 2011
I agree completely! Beat the Sh*t out of Jaycee And Cut off his dick in the process :DD
brichisa Wednesday, 25 May 2011
GO IRVINE! I JUST HOPE HE WILL BEAT THE S**T OUT OF THAT JERK, JAYCEE!

oh, and by the way, i love your story
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 25 May 2011
Seriously. Chop it all off.
 
donttellanyonewekissedfan Saturday, 8 October 2011
llllloooooooovvvvvveeeeeee thisssss(:(:(:(:
O O
L
l_____l
 
Arya Thursday, 30 June 2011
I LOVE THIS BOOK!! I can't wait to read more of your books :))
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 4 June 2011
TELL HIM RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Savhannah Daniels Friday, 3 June 2011
OMGGGGG I cant wait to read more this book is amazing!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Im so curious! What's gunna happen next!!!!!!
 
Elise Thursday, 2 June 2011
:OOO THEY ARE GONNA BEAT HIM UP RIGHT?? THEY SHOULD... >:3
 
Katarena Rae Monday, 30 May 2011
MOREMOREMOREMORE. i must have more. Q_Q
Emyline Grace Monday, 30 May 2011
oh shit!!!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Sunday, 29 May 2011
IRVINE TELL ETHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
 
Salamandear Thursday, 26 May 2011
IRVINE TO THE RESCUE!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 25 May 2011
OMG! TELL ETHAN, IRVINE!! TELL HIM SO HE CAN KILL JAYCEE!!!!!!!!!!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Yaaassssss Elena that would kick ass
 
Kalifornia Gurl Sunday, 5 June 2011
Hobo Rape! Ivrine needs 2 find the dirtiest, stinkiest and Dieseiest! HOBO N THE WORLD! Mayb he'll get Clamyda or General Herepes or something else! :DDD
 
Katarena Rae Saturday, 4 June 2011
HOBO RAPE. 8D
 
Zoey Balderston Saturday, 4 June 2011
YES!!! Let some hobo rape him! I love Irvine. Too much for words!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 4 June 2011
I want Jaycee to die. And I want Irvine AND Ethan to do it together.
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
IRVINE FOREVER
AM Saturday, 4 August 2012
I like them both, though i feel sorry for irvine. they're both great guys for her, yet they're opponents :( its kinda sad :/
 
CaitlinJean Wednesday, 15 June 2011
OMG I can't wait for the sequel! This was so frikken gooooood!

could somebody read one of mine? thanks!
 
Retriss Tuesday, 14 June 2011
I like the story itself, but I suggest working on your grammar and sentence structure. :)
Ryleigh Grace Saturday, 11 June 2011
Hurry up with the sequel!!!! I need more!!! This book has become my addiction! I seriously sat here on my computer reading ALL NIGHT!!
 
Kristen M.N. Hood Friday, 10 June 2011
i cant wait!!!!!!!
 
Katarena Rae Wednesday, 8 June 2011
OMGOMGOMG. O_O
Emyline Grace Tuesday, 7 June 2011
Okay, I can't wait!!! Im sooo excited for the sequal!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Sunday, 5 June 2011
MMR I WANT MORE! CAN'T WAIT 4 THE SEQUEL!
 
Savhannah Daniels Saturday, 4 June 2011
OMG!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Zoey Balderston Saturday, 4 June 2011
SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
 
Zoey Balderston Saturday, 4 June 2011
Yes, he is a tough opponent. =D IRVINExALEXINE YAY!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 4 June 2011
HURRY UP WITH THE SEQUEL!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Saturday, 4 June 2011
YAY!
Jasmin Thien Wednesday, 6 July 2011
I must say that this is a wonderful book. I admire the way you've built the story through, chapter by chapter.

The style of weaving a complicated love plot into one novel is superb. There aren't any flaws in that respect.

The only small fault I find here is the language. I'm sorry to say this but I really disapprove of using foul language (i.e. swearing) in a story. Don't worry - it isn't your fault. It's just me - I just don't feel as if a writer should incorprat such language in his or her book.

I'm just stating what I think here so please do not take offence. Other than the foul language thing, your book is astounding.

I'm looking forward to more.
 
PottermoreDreamer Monday, 27 June 2011
MORE PLEASEEE!!!!!
 
iamteamJACE Thursday, 23 June 2011
YEAH !!! im excited i cant wait till the sequel !!!!!!!!
<3
Emyline Grace Monday, 20 June 2011
Wow! This makes me want to read more!! I can't wait for the sequal!
Emyline Grace Monday, 20 June 2011
Wow! This makes me want to read more!! I can't wait for the sequal!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Saturday, 18 June 2011
I hate Jaycee He's a dick head. BUT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
 
smartysaar Friday, 17 June 2011
i meant More* not me lol
 
smartysaar Friday, 17 June 2011
I REALLY REALLY love this book :) my friend told me about it and i read it all at once :D You HAVE To keep updating it! I CANT WAIT FOR ME! you're an awesome writer, and the reason i registered on this website :D keep up the awesome work
 
Zoey Balderston Friday, 17 June 2011
F*ck off and die Jaycee!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 15 June 2011
Ohmygoodnessgracious. that's all i have to say. Oh, and YEAH YOU ADDED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kris Edwards Monday, 7 May 2012
I feel bad for Lexi but she needs to be with Irvine anyway!!! :P
 
KitKat =) Sunday, 25 September 2011
oh no...poor Lexi
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Tuesday, 13 September 2011
FINALLY POSTED AGAIN! Anways, I love it, even though it made me sad.
 
Sabrina Barnes Friday, 20 September 2013
I love reading this now that its finished. Reading these comments, I couldnt even imagine waiting for a next chapter. I would literally die! Youre amazing!
 
Carolann Beardmore Tuesday, 13 September 2011
Hi
This is an excellent book, can't wait for the next chapter. I was always on the edge of my seat waiting for 'what next?'

 
Elena Hathaway(again) Tuesday, 13 September 2011
LOL, coolness!
Hatewish Thursday, 8 September 2011
Sorry for the delay. XD
 
Kalifornia Gurl Thursday, 8 September 2011
Yay! You finally posted again! :DD
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 23 September 2011
Yay first comment! LOVE LOVE LOVE THANK GOD U POSTED AGAIN
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
Uh...with the rest. I'm confuzzled! Awesome, as always, but uh...don't get it.
 
natrock08 Friday, 30 December 2011
Okay im kindda confused. does that mean he was adopted??
Hatewish Friday, 23 September 2011
Lol what? I never mentioned anything about him being in the hospital lol. If you're talking about the previous chapter, he was just asleep in his own bedroom while Lexi was watching him sleep.
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 23 September 2011
Okay, I'm a little confussed on how Ethan was in the hospital and now he's up moving around... Its kinda confussing if you ask me
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Ethan you bastard
 
Sabrina Barnes Friday, 20 September 2013
NO! I dont like this nononoonononononononononononono D': Great book. But this cant be happening! :(
AM Saturday, 4 August 2012
The entire story plot reminds me of Marmalade Boy seires, though i really like it :)
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
ARHGHHJKGHSKJGHK! Ethan, can I just get a raincheck here?
Pink Panther Sunday, 30 October 2011
.....why is Ethan being such a complete jerk???
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
He is sooooo sweet
 
speaking insanity Thursday, 20 October 2011
i like it cant wait for you to post more
 
Braylee B Saturday, 15 October 2011
It's all amazing!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
 
Ruru4ever Thursday, 13 October 2011
This book is gr8 but what if Lexi starts loving Irvine i think its gonna boost things up :)
 
Kathleen Paddock Tuesday, 4 October 2011
EEH!!!! I just LOVE this book!
 
Ruru4ever Sunday, 2 October 2011
come on post more please :)
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 23 September 2011
Awh, she's cute
 
Kalifornia Gurl Friday, 23 September 2011
:ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *BIGGEST SHOCK EVER*
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Pink panther you r wrong Irvine belongs with her
 
Caryl Sophia Faith Thursday, 7 February 2013
IRVINE!!!! <3
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
yes!!!!!!!!! :D
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
IRVINE!!!!!!!!!!!
Pink Panther Sunday, 30 October 2011
Nooooooooo! Stupid Irvine, she belongs to Ethan! No matter how stupid he's being at the moment! Lol
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I think I am in love!!!!
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
It would be awesome if she ended up with irvine!!!! i'm in love with him c:
CookieQueen Thursday, 8 December 2011
OMG! I love love love this book!!! Not to try and advertise, but can someone please check out my book called 'love is dead', im new here and my book only has 1 chapter so far, but can someone give me some feedback please!!?
Anyway, awesome book :]
itDoesn'tmatter ;) Sunday, 27 November 2011
I love this book :) Mind reading and rating mine?? Only Drug You Need :)

Absolutely love this!!!!!! <3
 
Yours 4 Good Wednesday, 2 November 2011
um.. i love it but why did you repeat the last part twice? will you read my book and rate it please
 
Ruru4ever Tuesday, 1 November 2011
team irvine!!! Ethan is being a jerk while irvine is there for her!
keep posting Ernie =)
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Damn friendzoned
Nat-Nat Sunday, 18 December 2011
ive finally finished reading this book and it was amazing , you should make a sequal to it <3
 
Kathleen Paddock Wednesday, 30 November 2011
aww poor irvine!!!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Damn Irvine if you wanna tap DAT ass you will need some OD help my freind
 
(:[email protected]:) Saturday, 5 May 2012
Two words, Irvine. Friend...Zoned...haha, and hard, too! :P
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
You go, Lexi!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I meant I wanted her with irvine
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Awww ethan I wanted you soooo bad now I think your a dick what happened to "ethan I won't date any other boys if you will not dye any other girls." Well I wanted her with Ethan anyway to I say FUCK U ETHAN AND GO TO HELL JAYCEE
 
Sabrina Barnes Friday, 20 September 2013
I wanted her and Irvine together sine the start too. But not this way D: Wahh Ethan
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
been team irvine since the start ;)
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
I. Hate. Ethan. I am SO Team Irvine now!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Ethan you sir are a piece of shit!!!
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
i get it!! irvine knew ethan was goingvto break up wth her that day?
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Maybe I shouldn't murder jaycee yet
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
AHHHHHHH! THis book is infuriating! BUT I LOVE IT!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Screw ethan he can die in a hole with jaycee
 
Sabrina Barnes Saturday, 21 September 2013
OHMYDEARLORD. I cant take this. Its just too amazing. It makes me cry that Alexine and Ethan arent together though ... But other than that. Perff
mythoughtsiguess Tuesday, 21 August 2012
i adoooore this book. you are an AMAZING writter. love love love this book. should totaly be published.
ps: POST MOORE THERE IS SOOO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS... PLEEEASE
 
Renee W. Tuesday, 26 June 2012
Amazing! Can you please check out my story Shattered? Thanks :)

-ReNeE
 
LaurenHoward Thursday, 21 June 2012
*and should continue, need to know more:)
 
LaurenHoward Thursday, 21 June 2012
flmaiofnefnhyuhrfuiehmqmdhgxm...this is such an amazing book! its hard to explain how crazy amazing this si! this book is now officially my faaave book! this should be published! loved it, great jod:)
 
Penguin_Luver Monday, 4 June 2012
this is amazing :D
 
That One Girl Monday, 28 May 2012
I seriously love this book! It's amazing...Please write more(:

-Kitty Cat >^.^<
 
Bree Nicole Thursday, 19 April 2012
Omg this better not be the end.. Even though their brother and sister I want them to end up together!! This is an amazing book, I absolutely love it!! Please read the beginning of my book Locked Up and tell me what you think! Oh and Team Ethan!!! <3
 
new kate Saturday, 31 March 2012
Awesome, great, lovely book. You gotta finish it sooooooon because i wanna know what will happen :P you're such a good writer, keep on doing what you do, I wish you all the best. Love the book ;)
 
Elena Hathaway Friday, 2 March 2012
Rawr. That's all I can say. RAWR!
 
Sammy Rose Thursday, 23 February 2012
OMG, AMAZING !! I CRIED, LIKE, LITERALLY !!! WHEN'S THE SEQUEL ?? <------ see? it was soooo good, I used ALL CAPS :D
 
Maanpreet Monday, 20 February 2012
This book is so interesting. YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER. PLEASE UPLOAD MORE. :)
 
Renee W. Monday, 20 February 2012
Why aren't the other chapters from 62-72 not showing up?!?!?!? Please help!! Btw ammmmaaaazzzzziiinnnnngggggg!!!!
 
2random021 Sunday, 12 February 2012
oh my god! this is amazing! what's going to happen next! i can't wait! post more soon please!
 
2random021 Sunday, 12 February 2012
oh my god! this is amazing! what's going to happen next! i can't wait! post more soon please!
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
AND PLEASE POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Elena Hathaway(again) Thursday, 5 January 2012
Ummm....I'm feeling conflicted now...
 
Salamandear Thursday, 5 January 2012
PLEASE POST MORE!!!!
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Woah he is gonna do the do with his sis
 
TOKcombo277 Saturday, 15 September 2012
argh, i love this book (: keep writing.
saqlain Sunday, 9 June 2013
come on...update ur sequal to this book please.........
 
barbiecgfa15 Sunday, 25 November 2012
:O

please tell me theres more, because i will choke something right now
 
pursuitofstories Friday, 23 November 2012
oh my god. there aren't any other words right now.
 
Elena Hathaway Wednesday, 7 November 2012
I want to die, omg.
 
smartpuppy437 Monday, 22 October 2012
its that the end ????
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I have wattpad
 
smartpuppy437 Sunday, 30 December 2012
i really love this story ..you should posted on wattpad(:
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
I have wattpad!!
BittersweetIrony Monday, 31 December 2012
I agree with smartpuppy437 wattpad would be great people would love to see your works.
 
smartpuppy437 Sunday, 30 December 2012
hey you should really check out wattpad cause your a great writter
 
loveemocolor Friday, 13 March 2015
Nuuu not really
 
my_name_isXD Thursday, 15 January 2015
Oh. My. God. Even though it is short, it still ROCKS! Best Chapter Evah :D
 
teoreo Saturday, 23 January 2016
THIS IS THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ. ITS LIKE A MOVIE> I WISH MY BOOKS WERE THIS WELL WRITTEN. 5 STARS
BRADFORD.A213 Friday, 18 December 2015
GREAT STORY
 
Kyttin Wednesday, 21 May 2014
i definitely enjoyed this! i wouldve like to see the chapters longer though. but this was totally worth reading
Hatewish Thursday, 30 January 2014
Thank you Briezie for that wonderful comment. And John, I wouldn't say that you were rude or anything, but I don't really care if you're in a bad mood. First of all, before you post hate over the internet, especially in my comment box, you might as well read my profile first and get your head out of your ass for a little while. I write for fun, and its true that I don't care if my writing is horrible, good, or whatever adjective that you want to use against it. I am glad that there are people who love/like/enjoy reading what I write. I deeply appreciate those people who look at things that way. Go out and experience the real world? I have read countless of works from other authors, and even those people who are known for writing good novels suck at some point. Not that I'm going to compare myself to a professional one, because I'm just a random person writing a bunch of bullcrap over the internet because there are people who like what I do. And I like pleasing them, and yeah, its just fun to write! Well all I'm saying is, everything is about preference here. They like it, you don't. You like it, they don't. Who gives a shit? No one. Don't try to piss on other people's preference unless you want them shitting on yours. If you don't like it, don't read it. Why waste your time when you can go and get married and screw up your butt millions of times, since you're the one who talks about exploring the goddamn universe of dog poop. Hater. LOL.
 
Sabrina Barnes Saturday, 21 September 2013
Oh my. These last couple chapters have made me cry! You are an EXCELLENT writer. Going to book 2 now!
Briezie Wednesday, 4 September 2013
well john2054 that was kind of rude. It's a story not a full on published book and even those can have a lot of mistakes or sound extremely stupid. Just because you feel like your story was great doesn't mean everyones has to compare to yours. this is a website where people can put up there work and expect not to be put down just because they write a story that pops into their head.(It's not a competition on who can write better Just read the story and don't try to coach people on how to be creative. I thought the storry was great because it wasen't perfect it was HUMAN, meaning that it wasen't over thought and that writer didn't try to make it perfect.
 
john2054 Wednesday, 28 August 2013
I wanted to like this book. I really did. And it sure had me laughing when i read the early comments about the protagonist liking his sister's ass, and kissing her. However by about chapter thirty the novelty of this was wearing off. And by chapter fifty five I was thoroughly bored. Then by chapter eighty five i had had it with this book.

Now please don't take this the wrong way. I am a big fan of good chick lit fiction. But please don't think you can write a good book by plonking down the first drivel which comes into your head and piecing it together and calling it a novel. Unfortunately for you (and your readers) it doesn't work that way. Note how my first book only has fifteen chapters, but they have all been thought out. And each deal with a separate angle of the whole. Rather than just using the veneer of dialogue to pass off for a story. Go out and experience the world. Get married. Then write a novel. Not before. (PS sorry if this sounds a bit harsh but i'm not in a particularly good mood right now!)
 
E.D.I Thursday, 28 March 2013
Amazing. I just love this story. My only complaint, and the only reason that I gave you 4.5 stars instead of 5, is the grammar, spelling, and some odd word choices. This story is definitely a diamond in the rough and once you polish it up, boy will it shine! Also, if it's not too much trouble could I bother you to ask you to read my own story The Lost Magix? I just posted the first few chapters and am dying to find out what people think of it :) Thank you
 
Ka hona Saturday, 16 March 2013
Amazing!!

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