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rawr a book of rhyms, absoulutly short stories,writing, and really fun quotes

 
0002sirap Friday, 6 July 2012
Plz read my stories !!! Luv theses btw.
 
HayJay Tuesday, 3 July 2012
well personally through all the tears i would have decked the guy, but verry well writen and enjoyable in a sad, depressive sort of way ^_^
 
Joanne F. Saturday, 5 March 2011
Aww, that's so incredibly depressing D= But very, very creative.
I just want to point out that you should work a little bit on your grammar. Some commas and such. Oh, and you tell rather than show. And I'm not sure if you meant to do this, but you switched from third person narrative to first person.
Anyway, that's all ^_^

Oh, and only if you want to (and because I'm embarrassed for advertising this) would you like to read a couple of my short stories? My 'book' is called Remembered Thoughts.
Honey121 Saturday, 6 November 2010
I feel so bad to her! :( that was soo rude of him is this true or something? Bec the name is yours is this a memoir
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
oooh wow...
oh well now she knows he was so not worth it...

I have a feeling I'm really going to like this book ^_^
 
Molly S Monday, 19 April 2010
Loved it. Can you please read my new novel, Clique? Thanks.
A gril with a dream Saturday, 20 March 2010
loved it hope some one lookes at my first chapter in my first book '' The heart of a singer"" chapter 1 my life in the binging""
kaitlyn575 Friday, 18 December 2009
cool
Ava Estrella Thursday, 27 August 2009
this is not in the correct category!! DIRRRRR> its under drama. :P
 
A.E. Eidem Wednesday, 1 July 2009
Hey yah, me!
 
Scott Story Plots! Monday, 29 June 2009
This 1 was Really good... How embarrassing would that be????????
writer4life Thursday, 25 June 2009
Ohh i lik this can u check my book out and tell people about it to plz ;] check it out plz oh and this is funny!
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
raven, it was not true. Amy and i had the idea. Amy made it funny.
Raven Chamomile Wednesday, 6 May 2009
omigosh was that true? it was funny but was it true
Jack B. Nimble Sunday, 19 April 2009
Lol, even though this story ended with someone crying, I thought it was HILARIOUS! xD
 
Candi Star Thursday, 15 September 2011
very good! I love the whole idea of this book! check out my stuff?
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
Love it 8D
 
Molly S Monday, 19 April 2010
Thats so good. Check out my novel! pLEASE
dratolson Sunday, 6 September 2009
Thats amaazing! Check out my story?! Please
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
i agree with Chelsea Leigh
Jack B. Nimble Sunday, 19 April 2009
If you could maybe get rid of some of the repetitive "Ands" I think this poem would be much better :)
 
~*PinkInk*~ Monday, 3 August 2009
Your poems are very pretty!! <3

Check out some of my writing? I would love it if you would!! =D
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
ditto to Chelsea Leigh
Jack B. Nimble Sunday, 19 April 2009
Again, the repetitiveness. Only with the "I's"
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
the wind through the window
 
0002sirap Monday, 28 February 2011
I like the first story! Poor girl!
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
oooh love this one the most so far :D
 
A.E. Eidem Thursday, 8 April 2010
got this publshed
Hollie Black Tuesday, 16 February 2010
lol love this poem! =D
 
A.E. Eidem Friday, 21 August 2009
Nope. This was all me.
 
A.E. Eidem Friday, 21 August 2009
Nope. This was all me.
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
did you get that from our literature book?
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
that's cute <3
 
Na<3mi B. Friday, 18 September 2009
You, know. I've only read the first like, three chapters. And I think I could get interested. But I'm the type of person who reallly has a short attention span. And I will go on reading if I am bored enough. But right now, I'm not. So, I will check out this book again some other time. But not today.

And even if my comment sounds mean, could you please check out my book, The Mind Takers? I would really like your opinion. Thankyou.

~ Sincerely brought to you By,
Naomi B. ~
 
Candi Star Saturday, 11 July 2009
That is a really good poem!
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 28 May 2009
awwww
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
ooh
very nice!! Love it!!
 
~*PinkInk*~ Monday, 3 August 2009
Wow quote #1 is beautiful!! I agree with Candi Star!!
 
Candi Star Saturday, 11 July 2009
I love this quote and everyone should know it!
 
birdie Saturday, 11 July 2009
wow! this book is really amazing. I love the teddy bear one, the embaressing crush one (that would be awful!) and this one, the quote #1, it really makes you think.

great job!
 
Molly S Monday, 19 April 2010
awesome
 
Serafina Crane Monday, 5 April 2010
Sounds good :)
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
lol I can seriously relate to this... :P
 
Miss Unidentified Wednesday, 3 June 2009
is ur room really that bad!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!!!
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
nice :D
 
kittenlove123 Tuesday, 4 May 2010
lol
"I recommend that you not be scary"
:P
 
Candi Star Saturday, 11 July 2009
The flowers poem is very short but very good.
 
0002sirap Thursday, 7 March 2013
How cute!!!!
 
AM Thursday, 21 January 2010
I agree. Also, its not true that everyone wants to be loved, i kinda know a person or 2 who doesn't >.>
 
Erin Arnett Tuesday, 18 August 2009
everyone wants to be loved is kind of pointless because the sentence that comes out of the letter is supposed to describe love, but without using the word again.
 
Jinx Thursday, 19 August 2010
Tip taking. Lol
 
♥Leighann♥ Tuesday, 9 June 2009
this was in your book, my world
 
♥Leighann♥ Tuesday, 9 June 2009
yup, this was n your book
 
0002sirap Thursday, 7 March 2013
That was amazing!!! :)
 
♥Leighann♥ Tuesday, 9 June 2009
WOW.
 
Miss Unidentified Friday, 26 June 2009
oh my that is a sad dream!
 
-dont-hate-others Tuesday, 23 June 2009
-yawn-
It's just Me Friday, 19 June 2009
I would just like you to know for the short story: I laush and they cry that all names were changed
 
-dont-hate-others Friday, 12 June 2009
ugh. Have you ever heard of this new invention, called SPELLCHECK?
It's just Me Sunday, 12 July 2009
Hope yah like it!
 
LaShonda Monday, 4 April 2011
These "stories" and "poems" are religious bullshit. They're not even good. You're stories are less than mediocre, and you're poems sound like the one's I used to write in bible school, back when I was EIGHT. You're parents are probably right fags. That's the only reason you have or will ever get published. Stop writing, and go suck on Jesus.
 
Clinton Foster Wednesday, 20 January 2010
I actually have to admit, this hodge-podge works well. My best to you

www clintonfoster com
 
Erin Arnett Saturday, 12 September 2009
lol leighan seriously. Nobody just gets up and says "I think Ima go commit a sin today. Okay, maybe some sick murderers do but hopefully not this young audiance.
 
♥Leighann♥ Saturday, 15 August 2009
why would you want to sin anyway.
 
A.E. Eidem Thursday, 8 April 2010
yahweh is a actaukl word they use to descripe him and i dint know what to put for x and z
 
Erin Arnett Saturday, 12 September 2009
haha isn't that just the funniest little coincidence ever: me neither!
 
♥Leighann♥ Saturday, 15 August 2009
I dont get yahweh, x-rayed, and zuper kool..
 
♥Leighann♥ Thursday, 2 September 2010
amy.. . .seduced? look it up in the dictionary. the correct word would be embrace. :)
 
Sylvia H. Mullins Friday, 12 February 2010
i find this just too random, it seems like you like to focus on the lord (which isnt bad) but i find this really random (which again isnt bad)

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