Welcome to Gallagher

Jade Slee Monday, 6 December 2010
I'm the same as Whisper, not really into these books, however I will say that this was good in terms of quality. I definitely felt for Kai, especially at the part with her boyfriend, and I hope that this can continue to be really good, although I do have a feeling where part of this might be going I am full of suspense about the blurb... innocent or guilty does sound really interesting!
Whisper in the Night Monday, 11 October 2010
All right, as far as feedback, I'm not into these sort of books so I'll focus on your writings. As far as your third-person goes, this is really a nice piece of work. If you could work a little more feeling and maybe a few figurative languages (idioms, similies, metaphors, etc.) then you can get some very 'cheer'ful results. Four stars for the well-designed settings and the pointful narration.
K.M. Paxton Monday, 11 October 2010
I didn't know there were other books with that name, I just liked the name. Feedback, though?
Emyline Grace Wednesday, 6 October 2010
Okay I recomend that you change the school to another name, like Whisper said, there are books that have the school name in there.
Whisper in the Night Wednesday, 6 October 2010
Um, there already is a Gallagher Academy from a different book. I wouldn't necessarily call it plagarism but when I read this I can't help but think of the Gallagher Academy books.

Back to book