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Save Me From Falling

 
Whisper in the Night Friday, 10 September 2010
This scared me! haha, i thought she would be burned to death by the first line. It could use a little editing, but it is really a memorizing first chapter and you did really well :)
 
Amethyst Friday, 10 September 2010
its good! i like it. since you can write so well, mind checking out mine? it dosent have a title yet so it is called None (still in the thinking mode) lol thanks
Spindlegal Thursday, 2 September 2010
Nice description :)) I luv the name Aria!!!

Mind reading mine? Love at 14?
 
Ladia - lace Monday, 30 August 2010
I really love the story line of this book, its intriguing, mysterious and capturing. Cant wait to read more. Mind reading mine? The Last goodbye
 
Nadia Lino Sunday, 29 August 2010
i love this book. it's exciting and capturing - i'll be checking this out for more soon!
btw - do u mind reading my book playing with puppets and rating it plz?
 
Taylor Ann Sunday, 29 August 2010
Your description is fantastic. I love this start. I can't wait to keep reading it.
 
A.E. Eidem Tuesday, 7 September 2010
haha i like it a lot so far and the name of the chapter is awesome :) next time someone calls me tht i am so using that line ! hah
 
IAmWriting Sunday, 5 September 2010
This seems like a combination of pretty little liars and before I fall. Cool, I think Collins did it.
 
Helena Stobbeup Wednesday, 1 September 2010
Wow, I really really love this! Who's the killer?! No, wait, don't tell me I don't want to know! I want to figure it out myself, and if I guess correct, I'll be proud of myself (:
Post more soon.

Mind checking out mine? The Spy Academy and More Than Just A Shadow? Thanks in advance :D
 
sweettart224 Friday, 10 September 2010
oh my gosh! this book is soooo good!:) i cannot WAIT to read more!:) and it would mean a lot to me if you read and commented on my book, Surviving 12th Grade:)
 
Mahala Pincince Friday, 10 September 2010
and please read my book Roses are Red
 
Mahala Pincince Friday, 10 September 2010
I think yor book is pretty good so far and would like to read more!!
 
IAmWriting Thursday, 9 September 2010
Exactly what I was thinking HardCoreCritic<3, but maybe not that harsh...
 
HardCoreCritic<3 Thursday, 9 September 2010
Ok, I've been in the shadows for quite some time but this is an issue I REALLY feel the need to address...

So, let's just get it out into the open here: COPYING THE IDEAS OF OTHER AUTHORS, ESPECIALLY FAMOUS ONES, WILL NOT GET YOU PUBLISHED. IT WILL JUST GET YOU SUED AND FINED!!!!!!!!!
Now that that's out there, let me ask you something: Have you ever heard of the PRETTY LITTLE LIARS series by Sara Shepard and the book BEFORE I FALL by Lauren Oliver? Well I'm guessing you have because you are ALMOST DIRECTLY COPYING THESE BOOKS!!
You seem to be a pretty mature young lady so let me ask you if you've ever heard of this word: PLAGIARISM. I'm sure you have. It means taking someone else's work/idea WETHER OR NOT ITS PARAPHRASED and claiming it is your own. That is what you seem to be doing. And, maybe you're not doing it on purpose. Maybe you read those books and SUDDENLY for some reason, you came up with this idea of yours. It happens. I get that. But that doesn't mean you can't fix it. I'm not asking you to delete this book. It's a free country, buddy. I'm just saying, if you do choose to continue, SWISH IT UP A BIT. Play around with the plot or something so you seem like you have a mind of your own. And, if I deem it worthy, I'll increase my rating.
(Also, the frequent grammar mistakes need to be fixed, but it's nothing a good thorough editing can't fix.)

HardCoreCritic<3
 
♥, Emily Wednesday, 8 September 2010
OMG, it's really good so far. But you're kind of copying Pretty Little Liars. So try to make it a little more different and give it a twist so it wouldn't be obvious that you're story is kind of based on Pretty LIttle Liars
 
Alexandrite Haven Wednesday, 8 September 2010
oops, I forgot my rating.
~~Alex
 
Alexandrite Haven Wednesday, 8 September 2010
:O
Write more please :D
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 7 September 2010
Holy Shit! This is amazing! Yet confusing, but amazing none the less.

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