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Arabian Knights

 
Goodwin Thursday, 20 June 2013
Ah, damn. I was planning on doing a crusades story and now I feel like a rip off. I'll have to do a fantasy re-imagining of the crusades instead.
 
Joe Thorpe Friday, 24 September 2010
random, poor english.. not a fan im afraid
 
China Roses Monday, 23 August 2010
Good book. But divide the chapters. It is to long to read in only one page like this. Could you rate my books?
Whole Tuesday, 22 February 2011
I'm getting SOOOO tired of saying this:

Your plot is fantastic, and has huge potential, but, work on the language, the dialogue, description, action, literary devices. The grammar's awful, so proofread that.

THIS PLOT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL! DON'T WASTE IT! Go over your entire book, start over, whatever you want, but if you want to be published it has to be stunning. And, quite honestly, this is nowhere near stunning.

I'm only saying this because of the plot... the rest can be salvaged, so salvage it.

Good luck!
 
Jay C Monday, 6 September 2010
By the way saw your question on yahoo, so just commenting here.
Hmmm I like it so far, it's interesting. You writing flows well and dude you seem like a pretty good author. I think you should maybe make the chapters longer, that's the only thing. But good good!
 
Anna Joan Tuesday, 7 June 2011
I don't care what you think or what other people think, but this book is amazing :) Yes, you may have a couple mistakes here or there, but ignoring that, you have a great start in your hands and I'm amazed :D

PS-The last couple of chapters aren't the strongest but they have great potential! Keep writing!

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