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The Girl Who Cried War

 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
I know most woul think of the old language as a bad thing, but I really enjoy it. If you ever try talking like that for a whole afternoon, you will see my meaning 8).
 
Abby Vandiver Friday, 13 July 2012
The language written here is archaic ("whenst,"footfall," and "sacrosanct epistle") and no seventeen and nineteen year old would talk like that. No one in the military can wear red socks. It would seem impossible for her and Nathaniel to spend so much time together and the parents didn't know. Bad parenting, I guess.

I think that you write very well. You should not rely on that Thesaurus so much. Excellent idea for a story but hard for me to get through because the way it reads.
 
iWasBorn2TellUiLuvU Sunday, 13 May 2012
:D
 
Lunausa Monday, 30 April 2012
There is some great vocab in here and the plot is one I have not seen before!!
 
Shygirl15 Tuesday, 28 February 2012
This is really good!!!!:)
 
Skylark Wednesday, 29 June 2011
oh my god..you sure know to hook your readers!! :D i began reading this and didn't stop..the decision to not read chapter two yet is almost killing me..but i think with a beginning as good as this, i'll be hooked D: i shall make time for this another day :P but for now, 5 stars and a favourite :D
 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
Nnnnnooooo!!!!!! Make the mean girl get her butt kicked or at least have the teacher call her parents so that she gets scolded. >:(
 
Lunausa Monday, 30 April 2012
Another amazing chapter and you made me feel what you wanted to say. Also, I only counted one grammar mistake which is very impressive!!
 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
*rolling eyes at previous comment* riiiiiight, boring. As if it could ever be called that.
 
Taylor Ann Wednesday, 18 August 2010
This is so good! Your description is amazing, but sometimes there is so much of it and I get a little bored. Other then that I think you are an amazing writer and you have a very good story going. :) If you would read something of mine, I would really appreciate it!
 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
There I lay on the soft bed, tears running down my face as I read the chapter. As I slowly started to grieve for the characters' own emotions. This is a good book, I whispered, this is a good book.
 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
Her parents are going to freak out to the extreme, so I hope you give more details about them...
 
TheOneDrivenToWrite Sunday, 30 December 2012
The first book for me to read on this website, the first book that made me cry, and the first book for me to rate a 5. All in all, I must say that I loved this book!!!!! 8) Now to figure out how this site works......
 
Taylor Ann Wednesday, 18 August 2010
Yep. You are right. It did get good. So good I had to finish the whole thing!! Oh my goodness that was spectacular!! Great great job! I loved it!!!! :)

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