For A Friend

Jessica E Tuesday, 10 August 2010
I'm sorry about Leah - it's so nice of you to write poems for her!
Would you mind taking the time to look at my books please?
Julia R. West Thursday, 12 August 2010
That's a good suggestion. I'll be sure to put that in. Thanks!
Jordan Yates Tuesday, 10 August 2010
"Far away to the countryside
away from all the lights"
This line is really good... However, I think it may flow better if it were
"Far away to the countryside
Away from all the city lights".
That's just my opinion. Otherwise, this poem is great. An immense amount of emotion is written in these words. I really love the way you write, very in depth.

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