Dark Mercenaries

Whole Tuesday, 22 February 2011
HAHA! If this continues like this, I may have just read Chapter 1 of my favorite book on this site.

Blip- it does sound history bookish, but keep in mind it's an intro, a prolouge.

I'm off to favorite, and keep reading (hopefully).
Blip! Wednesday, 21 July 2010
This seems exciting. It's quite a good intro though it sounds a little history book ish. You introduce quite a few unusual names and that may confuse the reader a little. Other thanthat well done. I'm going to add this to my favz to read on later:).

Could you check oit a littlof ONCE if you have time and you don't have to read all.
Whole Tuesday, 22 February 2011
This is good. You should review your grammar though- especially changing tenses.

The book is occasionally monotonous or redundant: try varying the writing, add some description, action, etc.

Other than that, it's good!
Penpaladin Saturday, 6 August 2011
I Think the books good. Although the fact that there is not a single fighter in all of the empire seems kind of strange. But hey, its your book not mine.
booklover95 Friday, 23 July 2010

You have talent, you should enter my contest! If you win this book could be FEATURED!

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