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Dark Mercenaries

Whole Tuesday, 22 February 2011
HAHA! If this continues like this, I may have just read Chapter 1 of my favorite book on this site.

Blip- it does sound history bookish, but keep in mind it's an intro, a prolouge.

I'm off to favorite, and keep reading (hopefully).
Blip! Wednesday, 21 July 2010
This seems exciting. It's quite a good intro though it sounds a little history book ish. You introduce quite a few unusual names and that may confuse the reader a little. Other thanthat well done. I'm going to add this to my favz to read on later:).

Could you check oit a littlof ONCE if you have time and you don't have to read all.
Whole Tuesday, 22 February 2011
This is good. You should review your grammar though- especially changing tenses.

The book is occasionally monotonous or redundant: try varying the writing, add some description, action, etc.

Other than that, it's good!
 
Penpaladin Saturday, 6 August 2011
I Think the books good. Although the fact that there is not a single fighter in all of the empire seems kind of strange. But hey, its your book not mine.
 
booklover95 Friday, 23 July 2010
THIS IS GOOD! I LOVE IT! haha

You have talent, you should enter my contest! If you win this book could be FEATURED!

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