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B.N.F Monday, 23 May 2016
Loved this poem! Great job!
Mi Wang Thursday, 27 November 2014
I could feel the emotion in this one pretty vividly, and I love the form you wrote it in! Great job! ^3^
Rocky Rochford Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Wow, so very beautifully put, such heartfeltwork. You have a way with words, any chance you could check out my book of poetry and give me some pointers perhaps.

My book is: The Life of Little Boy Death
 
Rebecca Roland Thursday, 4 October 2012
i can feel the promise of the kiss and the strong arms, contrasted with the deception of how that's just what you wanted to hear. love it.
Jessica C. Wewer Tuesday, 28 August 2012
I agree with Jude that the syllables dont match up and this does make it an uneasy flow...over all thoght it came from the heart and was Beautiful! Im new here and at the moment have one poem id love for you to check it out and leave any comments! Thanks
 
DayBreakRose Sunday, 22 January 2012
Wonderfully written. I can feel the emotion you put into the poems.
Jordan Yates Wednesday, 20 July 2011
Definitely well worded, but the lines don't have the best flow-- some of the words have too many syllables compared to the lines surrounding them. My only advice to you is to try and write your poems with better rhythm. Otherwise, amazing writing. You definitely have a way with words :)
-Jude
 
Chey Chey Saturday, 19 February 2011
This is a great poem. :) Read mine?
 
Jazmine Beckett Saturday, 18 December 2010
wow this is really good!
check out my poems?
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
i love this. its amazing. wow. i've got chills
~Jessia*The*Star~ Thursday, 26 August 2010
Thanks. =) And sorry about your friend, I know how she feels..
 
Neil Evans Friday, 20 August 2010
This poem reminded me of a friend. She was in love with a guy, they got in a stupid fight, and he walked out of her life forever. Very good poem!
 
MaddieBear c: Wednesday, 30 June 2010
aww soooo touching
common Tuesday, 22 June 2010
THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE HOW YOU KEEP IT INTERSRING WHEN YOU WERE EXPRESSING IT OUT THERE I GIVE IT A 100 KEEP WRITTING
~Jessia*The*Star~ Sunday, 16 May 2010
=) Thanks!
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 16 May 2010
Aw! So adorable.
 
Love2Read Monday, 3 May 2010
AWWW, I really like this. Check out my book, "Blood, Sweat, and Tears?"
 
Katrina Brady/spirit Tuesday, 5 March 2013
I really like this poem, it has such raw emotion!
 
Anime_girl207 Friday, 11 March 2011
i agree with engel, but the rest of the poem connected with me deeply.
Engєl Monday, 7 February 2011
I like the poem...
but I think, it would be better if you don't repeat: So what... & Guess what... that often, because they make people get tired during the reading.
keep up the good work :)
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
this hurts me inside ... i can feel it, i can feel you
 
Zoey Koppang Monday, 3 May 2010
Wow, these poemswere amazing. Very intense. I loved it!
 
AliciaLuv13 Wednesday, 4 April 2012
Very touching and excellent poems. 5 Stars!
Redroses Sunday, 6 November 2011
WOW!!! this gave me goosebumps...it seems that you write from the heart...! good job!!!
~Jessia*The*Star~ Monday, 22 November 2010
:)Wow, thanks, that's a huge compliment. And much appreciated.
 
Jessica E Sunday, 21 November 2010
nice
 
Zafir Monday, 15 November 2010
ur poems was the best i've read. of all the poems i've read in this site, none is best compared to yours.
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
i think we all relate there lol ... so very tired
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
oh snap haha, sorry i had to ... but yeah people kinda just snap their life on by not noticing the pain they cause to others
 
tiffernynicole Saturday, 11 December 2010
Wow. That stirred up emotions inside of myself. This made me miss my ex. :/
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
i can think of someone i miss ;]
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
i can rap this lol nice work
 
China Roses Sunday, 3 October 2010
The poems are good. There are one or two spellling mistakes, but everybody has mistakes. Good Job!!!!

Could you rate my books?
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
hey, Jess i like what Love 2Read had to say. She's a friend of mine. And in a way i agree with what she has to say, but i think i ranted enough about you. =}
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
same here, try rapping it. It's good seriously.
 
Love2Read Thursday, 24 June 2010
I like your poems so much! <3 I'm also commenting for another reason, I came across your comments here and you shouldn't make yourself feel bad. Calling yourself those things will make you believe them. Who cares what others think? As long as if you don't think the same. It will only bring your self confidence down and that could potentially lead into messy situations...What I'm trying to say is, be confident about yourself and don't care about what others say.
 
Michael Anthony F. Tuesday, 31 August 2010
the thoughts of all teenagers huh? lol
 
Booperkat Thursday, 28 October 2010
Your poems are great. You're very talented It's hard to write a poem that rhyhmes on every line and is still not childish and you can really feel your emotions. Keep writing :) you are great
 
Booperkat Thursday, 28 October 2010
Haha, it is pretty great
~Jessia*The*Star~ Monday, 10 May 2010
Uh whoa, I just typed this, and just read it, and the beginning is a bit forced, but the end is.. I mean, yea.. I can't beleive I wrote that. xP (NOT trying to sound gloating or anything-if anyone understands what I'm trying to say??) xP
~Jessia*The*Star~ Sunday, 5 September 2010
That's sad, but yea, glad someone finally seems to get how I'm feeling. Well, if you ever need a shoulder to lean on, or advice, I'm always here. =)
 
His Evil Angel Saturday, 4 September 2010
I know just how you feel. I was thinking about suicide a couple of months ago. My dad had died recently and ever since then I've wanted to be with him...
 
Lexx__ Saturday, 25 January 2014
Attention grabbing, twisting, gets one thinking.
 
MeghanXMurder Saturday, 31 December 2011
This is amazing poety! have you ever thought of self publishing? iI bet you would sky rocket!
 
MeghanXMurder Saturday, 31 December 2011
This is amazing poety! have you ever thought of self publishing? iI bet you would sky rocket!
 
MeghanXMurder Saturday, 31 December 2011
This is amazing poety! have you ever thought of self publishing? iI bet you would sky rocket!
 
shanniebear Wednesday, 26 January 2011
wow, intense, loved it
~Jessia*The*Star~ Sunday, 13 June 2010
So.. My sister hates me.. Obviously, but hey, family is family right? I may as well leave it up, she's not half wrong anyway, me=worthless, stupid, untalnted, useless.. The list goes on.
 
Zinnia A. Wednesday, 6 October 2010
I am feeling really bad for you! It's really well.

Mind reading mine? :)
 
Lady Coldfeather Friday, 6 April 2012
The opening completely hooked me. I really enjoyed this poem. I felt as utterly wild and free as the stallion. Wonderful :)
~Jessia*The*Star~ Monday, 29 November 2010
Ha! Chu rated and all. :P I has to try so hard not to use my "normal" writing in here, everytime I put you I put chu first and had to backspace and write you. XD Hate it.. Lol well I got myself into that habbit. Wait wait.. I'ma NOT gonna start rambling in a comment box. *humph* XD
 
PartyPoison Monday, 29 November 2010
haha i love it :D kinda sad tho :/ but it made me smile :)

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