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D.C. Williams Friday, 16 September 2011
This is amazing! Originality for the win! Written beautifully! Please continue this! #Favorited
 
Jacky K. Tuesday, 4 May 2010
The one thing that stood out to me while reading this is the originality of this story. After a while it gets a bit tiring reading about true love and vampires, high school and other overused topics. Sure, there have been stories along the lines of where this seems to be headed, but so far you have your own original flare to it. This was a nice break, and an intruiguing setting. Well done :)

Wanna check out mine? It's called "The Moon's Lullaby". It's an adventure, too, but definately a different style of adventure than what you've got here. I would really appreciate some constructive critisism :) Thanks in advance, if you get around to it.

Happy writing!
 
Alyvia Connors Tuesday, 27 April 2010
This idea happens to be...well awesome. I love it already-not to mention it's written beautifully, great jpb! I cant wait to read more

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