Sylvia H. Mullins Saturday, 30 April 2011
Hm... Sounds like you have a interesting start. But just one suggestion: As the story progresses try to stay away as far as you can from any star crossed lover supernatural Twilight kind of thing, because the second you do, Everyone is going to jump on your boat screaming "Your coping twilight!" When in all actuality Twilight is a mix of Anne rice and William Shakespeare. ;) Anyways I hope to see more in the future... Meaning soon :)
 
UndeadBeauty Saturday, 30 April 2011
OM MY GOD!!! WRIT EMORE! I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR YOUR SPIN ON THIS!!!!
-Capitalletters, Moon Angel is a saga I wrote a while ago. You can read them. it'd be easier to understand If you knew what/who they were. <3
GO LAUREN!!!!!!!!
Capitalletters Saturday, 30 April 2011
Interesting, seeing I don't even know what a moon angel is! But that is some name, I don't even know how to say it!
Anyway, it looks like a good start, well done and I can't wait to rate it when I read more...
Mind reading mine?
Capitalletters Saturday, 30 April 2011
Interesting, seeing I don't even know what a moon angel is! But that is some name, I don't even know how to say it!
Anyway, it looks like a good start, well done and I can't wait to rate it when I read more...
Mind reading mine?