sweettart224 Friday, 10 September 2010
oh my gosh! this book is soooo good!:) i cannot WAIT to read more!:) and it would mean a lot to me if you read and commented on my book, Surviving 12th Grade:)
 
Mahala Pincince Friday, 10 September 2010
and please read my book Roses are Red
 
Mahala Pincince Friday, 10 September 2010
I think yor book is pretty good so far and would like to read more!!
 
IAmWriting Thursday, 9 September 2010
Exactly what I was thinking HardCoreCritic<3, but maybe not that harsh...
 
HardCoreCritic<3 Thursday, 9 September 2010
Ok, I've been in the shadows for quite some time but this is an issue I REALLY feel the need to address...

So, let's just get it out into the open here: COPYING THE IDEAS OF OTHER AUTHORS, ESPECIALLY FAMOUS ONES, WILL NOT GET YOU PUBLISHED. IT WILL JUST GET YOU SUED AND FINED!!!!!!!!!
Now that that's out there, let me ask you something: Have you ever heard of the PRETTY LITTLE LIARS series by Sara Shepard and the book BEFORE I FALL by Lauren Oliver? Well I'm guessing you have because you are ALMOST DIRECTLY COPYING THESE BOOKS!!
You seem to be a pretty mature young lady so let me ask you if you've ever heard of this word: PLAGIARISM. I'm sure you have. It means taking someone else's work/idea WETHER OR NOT ITS PARAPHRASED and claiming it is your own. That is what you seem to be doing. And, maybe you're not doing it on purpose. Maybe you read those books and SUDDENLY for some reason, you came up with this idea of yours. It happens. I get that. But that doesn't mean you can't fix it. I'm not asking you to delete this book. It's a free country, buddy. I'm just saying, if you do choose to continue, SWISH IT UP A BIT. Play around with the plot or something so you seem like you have a mind of your own. And, if I deem it worthy, I'll increase my rating.
(Also, the frequent grammar mistakes need to be fixed, but it's nothing a good thorough editing can't fix.)

HardCoreCritic<3