Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
I agree with SydneyFaith. Really really good. Definitely reading on. (:
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Um this person that commented before me is kinda mean..but anyways, nice chapter :) seems to me like aubrey is playing hard to get!
K. Hanson Sunday, 7 February 2010
I'm starting to wonder if all you sweet teenage girls go to the same school and have the same Lit assignments? You all write well, but the details of character personalities almost inevitably turn out the same. Do you all take art classes together too?

So far the reason I like your book is because it is set in familiar territory. I live in AZ. The desert heat is described exactly as it is, so I gather that you, too, have had the experience. lol.

Great spelling and grammar, for which I thank you wholeheartedly!!! I would be proud to be acknowledged as your teacher, were I so honored.

Kick in a whole lot of imagination, and you have a winner here. :)
Isabella Darcy Friday, 25 December 2009
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate everything :D
stormy no-one Thursday, 24 December 2009
Hmmm... I like Frank, but I'm not sure about Aubrey. The poor guy is probably under some delusion that Aurora's grandma made about her.
Anyway, yeah, your grammar is great which I REALLY love!
The only thing that caught my eye was that 'dad,' and the days of the week should be capitalized, but that's only because I OCD over editing. Awesome!