LittleWolf Friday, 10 May 2013
you need to make sure you give credit to erin hunter for her story idea, and that you are creating a fanfiction and not claiming this as your sole idea. its an okay story line, it has its interesting parts, however i believe it could be written a bit better
Vivia Strachan Austin Aut Tuesday, 2 October 2012
I started reading and immediately I recall a book I read before about some warrior cats. Some of the comments are suggesting you copied another author's work. You could make the story your own by just being yourself. Let the story come out of yourself and not from someone else. You cannot fool the public. I have seen a lot of areas where your writing needs improving. Don't give up. Keep trying, but before you put your stories out there, do your best to make it as error free as possible. No one is perfect, but at least check your work before you put it out there. Best regards.
Okay Thursday, 28 July 2011
I really like your plot and story..Just amazing
 
Take My Dreams Wednesday, 20 October 2010
As many other people mentioned who read this: it sounds just like the Warriors series -- about a clan of cats. It'd be nice if you gotten your own ideas (you're probably going to object and say it was just an inspiration, but it sounds very alike as well as the odd names, hopefully you're aware) or at least took the ideal of cats and use it as your base but turn it into something else. This has potentional, though, but to be honest it isn't my type of story.
 
ChattyCathy Saturday, 26 June 2010
Cathy's friend who dosent have an account: Well like cathy said, you have a great idea for a warriors story but i mean you can't publish a book thats copyed from a series that published. I know there are websites out there that you can write warrior based storys but they wont be published. Sorry to be troll'n on cathy's account so please don't be mad at her.
-Aries