Charly Froerer Friday, 5 April 2013
This is really good. Sure, capitalization would be nice, but some stories don't have it. Most stories do, but some don't, just to fit the story. I am writing a story where one of the main characters writes without capitalization.
I like your book. I've only read the first chapter, and sounds good. The words you use make it flow nicely. It sounds like a really good book.
Rabid Weasel Thursday, 17 January 2013
The books a bit confusing and the capitalization just was super annoying. Please do something about that.
Vivia Strachan Austin Aut Tuesday, 2 October 2012
Seems like a good story, but not capitalizing really annoyed me. Please, do something about this. No one is going to take you as a writer seriously if you don't change. I am just trying to help. I hope you fix it. I would love to read it.
MyNameisChance Friday, 21 September 2012
I understand what is like to have bad spelling or forget to capitlize, dont give up but work on it. Just remmber that it's more important to have a good story then a to have good spelling. Thats what spell check and editors are for. Keep up the good work.
Audrey... Sunday, 22 January 2012
Okay... I have to say...
This is a serious site. If you were serious about the story, you would pay attention to the grammar. And by that, I mean the fact you wrote your whole text without a single capital letter. Maybe your story is good, I don't know, I couldn't read much of it since the grammar pissed me off. I cant give this a good rate. Correct it and I might read it someday.