Piercing The Sky, A Book of My Poems
Author: Neil Evans

Chapter 35
Incomplete Failure (1)

I shall be posting my poems that really are no good, ones that I just want to put up to see the comments. These haven't been editted/completed like my others. So, I shall give them the same name each time, just with a number next to it.




I said I wanted to try again

I didn't want to die, again

I guess that it's time, again

I did that damn crime, again


Now I look in my chest

Where is my heart?

Oh right, I threw it out

I look into my body

Where did my soul go?

Oh right, I burned it out


But I did something for you

I saved your heart

It's a bit broken, a bit crooked

But it might still work


I checked my pulse

There isn't one


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