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Author: It's just Me

Chapter 9
giving up

GIVING UP                   Amy Eidem

                                                                                                                               11/02/08

                                                                                                                               3rd

I want to give up cleaning my disaster of a room. Cleaning my room takes a lot of strength and is very exhausting. I can take care of a small mess but a big mess is way too overwhelming. Since my room is one of those big messes its very overwhelming.     

 My room smells like dirty laundry or your sweaty armpits after an extremely intense workout. My favorite Glade air freshener can’t even cover up the smell, even with all the help from my super fast breezes from the twirling fan. The walls feel of grease and are slimy. A big bump is behind the door because of the door handle. A hole in the wall from the last time I played baseball in my room is covered by an old poster from one of my teen magazines.

The thought of cleaning my room is funny. The thought is not happening either. Most of my mess is my scruffled dirty cloths in piles all over the floor. I have lots of cloths, and a compact closet that can only hold about a forth of my cloths.

When I feel up to cleaning my room my mom comes in and helps me. She is a great help. Her five minutes is like my hour. My mom gives me motivations. Like if you clean your room ill give you twenty dollars or ill buy you that purse you have been wanting.

Overall I really want to give up cleaning my room. Even with all the spectacular motivations, and help from my mom. I wish I had a maid to clean my horrible room. This way I could relaxes, drinking expensive bit sour fruit juice

  

 

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