Friendship Mirrors
GenreFantasy
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Sunday, 4 April 2010
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(7 ratings)
Read by:180 different readers
 

Tyler starts her first year at Shine Academy. She is a shy yet fearless girl who can charm anybody with her smile. But she is faced with her mortal enemy, Bianca Riches who is a threat to her reality and love life. Can Tyler make it through the rollercoaster ride of high school ?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 The Beginning
Ch. 1 Shine Academy
Ch. 2 Oh Charlie! <3
Ch. 3 Crisis in the Restaurant

Comments

AddyB1 Wednesday, 20 July 2011
POST MOREEE
 
Annabel Bay Friday, 16 April 2010
I love the examples you use and how the character thinks. It is very random, but it flows simply, like a river full of rocks. I really like it...Write more!
 
Sega Parks Thursday, 15 April 2010
This is great! :) I like it. keep it up. The only thing I would suggest is to enhance your sentences a little bit more.
 
Black Whispers Wednesday, 14 April 2010
i loved it x] i really did..but may i make one suggestion..?? a tad more description..? :) that would make me love it even more :)
 
. Tuesday, 13 April 2010
It's a catchy read but I agree with the others in that you need a slightly bit more description, and a little bit of a spell check. But apart from that it's very good and I want to read the rest. Good work :)

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