Untrustable
GenreYoung Adult / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Saturday, 13 March 2010
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(6 ratings)
Read by:275 different readers
 

I was thirteen when the Blue Virus hit not only my town, but the whole world. The government was trying to increase the life span of your average human, hoping to successfully boost our immune systems. Making it harder to kill us with diseases such as cancer, or aids. Lets just say they got to out of hand, and ended up adding chemicals to prevent weight gain, and maintain a healthy life style. The mixed chemicals where put into every water supply around the world, causing the Blue Virus. It contaminated our water, and turned you into a "super human" as the government wanted....but it also messed with your head. Made you bitter and angry at everything around you. Made you want to kill. These "super humans" earned the name Crimson, for the blood that stains their hands. As Crimsons stalk the human deserted towns looking for people to kill, they are reproducing, creating more and more killing machines. The only hope left? Every human I meet tells me I am going to save everyone with the help of a man.....how? How the hell am I supposed to know?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Everyday Encounters
Ch. 2 Surprising Meeting

Comments

 
Madeline Taylor-Applegate Tuesday, 16 August 2011
Hey, this is pretty good so far! I like the idea and the construction of your chapters, however, if you hadn't added the author's note at the beginning of chapter 2, I still wouldn't know the main character's name. This is one of my biggest pet peeves and it's the main reason I didn't give you 5 stars. I won't bother commenting on tense switching or grammar because editing will fix that and I understand this is a rough draft. Excellent work so far!

Maddie
 
China Roses Monday, 4 October 2010
This a very different story. In a good way. It is one of the best futuristic stories I have read.

Could you rate my books?
 
Karleydean Friday, 9 April 2010
You should keep going with this! I like it alot!!! Post more soon please!!!

Dean
 
Heather M. Monday, 22 March 2010
I love it! I want more!
 
That One Girl Monday, 22 March 2010
At least you always are doing SOMETHING, why are they following you, WHEN DO YOU GET TO EAT AND SLEEP-btw-♥ it LOTS!!!!!

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