Eve of Man
GenreSci-Fi / Adventure
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Monday, 25 January 2010
Star rating:
(1 rating)
Read by:380 different readers

Striker grew up in hiding. He was considered a mutant among the aliens around him. For his entire life, he assumes he's an outcast, and spends his days exercising his extensive aptitude with mechanics. Until the day he finds out he's the last Rah, an ancient race of mankind, and the only race in the universe that has a chance of defeating the Diakon, tyrants and conquerers of the known solar systems.

His ship's artificial intelligence, named Alexander, sets him on a course through the universe, following his father's breadcrumbs to find out what happened to the legendary race of Rah.


List of chapters

Ch. 1 A Mutant among Aliens
Ch. 2 Three Ancient Races
Ch. 3 A Night in the City
Ch. 4 At the Beginning
Ch. 5 Thira of the Yentu
Ch. 6 Fying lessons
Ch. 7 CR37-4, the Ice Colony
Ch. 8 The Diakon King
Ch. 9 Graduation Night
Ch. 10 Takatora
Ch. 11 Cargo Ship


stormy no-one Saturday, 3 April 2010
I really don't think I have enough experience to critique this.
The description is excellent, and the grammar is good. These are the two things that always pull me into a story. Not to mention the plot sounds like it's going to be very fun.

I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.


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