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GenrePoetry / Drama
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Wednesday, 18 June 2008
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(10 ratings)
Read by:356 different readers

The richest poem i have, linguistically speaking would be this one:

Lacuna Skeleton

My innocent bones splinter.
So faded from the winter'

Lacuna Skeleton...
Heart has gone dead again.

Red dust within it's cavity.
A fatal punch by gravity!

Streetlight eyes, algid again.
My child dies a skeleton!

My inner mindscapes duel
And the whispered screams pule

For It's pessimal outside my fence.
Out where they vitiate my innocence!

So my haptic self, will dig a hole.
And it's solitude shall sooth my soul.

Yes i'll dig a hole of six by three.
expressive silence, the perfect meed!


List of chapters

Ch. 1 Lacuna Skeleton
Ch. 2 monkeys can use tools
Ch. 3 pridewalk
Ch. 4 if there is a God up there
Ch. 5 The love you seek
Ch. 6 Skeleton Jones
Ch. 7 such is war
Ch. 8 bedroom eyes
Ch. 9 a little octopussy
Ch. 10 um...
Ch. 11 murdered by...
Ch. 12 "smell the roses"
Ch. 13 _blue_
Ch. 14 naughty little devil girl
Ch. 15 merely perception
Ch. 16 introspection forced
Ch. 17 living half dead
Ch. 18 here there's no deception
Ch. 19 hiding from yourself
Ch. 20 awaken the beast exstisential
Ch. 21 ripples
Ch. 22 paper tigers
Ch. 23 no intrinsic factor
Ch. 24 hold up some paper
Ch. 25 should our eyes be closed forever
Ch. 26 the thief
Ch. 27 rumor has it
Ch. 28 painted memories
Ch. 29 midnight blue


Stephen Delee Tuesday, 14 September 2010
good, well written poem, love the last stanza! But a lot of the poem is really vague in description and stingy with words in a way that kind of prevents the reader from connecting I think..
stormy no-one Saturday, 1 August 2009
I loved Monkeys Can Use Tools, it made me laugh. How long did it take for you to think of how to write that? It was great (Cheerfully cynical haha)!
Tatchania Wednesday, 24 June 2009
I like this one allot. It really flows. Great message.
Tatchania Wednesday, 24 June 2009
Really good. :D
El Sexmo Monday, 16 March 2009
hahaah love it! brill.

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