Blue and Maker
GenreSuspense / Sci-Fi
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Thursday, 24 September 2009
Star rating:
(3 ratings)
Read by:277 different readers

Four men, brought together by the conundrum known as circumstance, must delve into the depths of human limitation when six year-old, Abel, goes missing; an orphaned and "special" little girl.


List of chapters

Ch. 0 Forward
Ch. 1 [J.]
Ch. 2 [Room 332]
Ch. 3 [Fringe]
Ch. 4 [Wander]
Ch. 5 [Gift]
Ch. 6 [Larke]
Ch. 7 [Crumbs]
Ch. 8 [Spots]
Ch. 9 [Blue/Maker]


Madeline Taylor-Applegate Monday, 21 March 2011
I love this! You have an incredible handle on the English language and such a grace to your storytelling. It's really refreshing. I only have one small critique on this chapter, when you're telling the story of the bank robbery, you mentioned the robber was shot four times and then escorted to jail. Don't you think it more likely that he would have a police escort to the hospital?

Nothing else really caught my attention as being out of place. Your flow is very nice, and the pacing is good with his flashbacks and memories - it gives the reader all the needed history, but not all at once, so it isn't boring.

Very, very well done!
readerofbooks Saturday, 10 October 2009
readerofbooks Saturday, 10 October 2009

Purely Genious
ChrisHanson Sunday, 4 October 2009
decent but it's a little too much with ever other word being a "big word" don't mean to sound rude but it's like you're trying "too hard" to be smart? If that makes sense.
J.B. Cole Sunday, 27 September 2009
I need to proofread this. Sorry to all of you reading this and are noticing all of my mistakes.

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