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GenreFantasy / Young Adult
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Monday, 14 September 2009
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(39 ratings)
Read by:673 different readers
 

Be careful what you wish for. Sean Lane never thought much of that saying, until it became the beginning of something far bigger and far more dangerous than he ever imagined.

He was just an average student, going into his last year of secondary school in dreary England - the land of eternal rain. Unpopular, friend's with the school nerd, an absentee father and a sufferer of amnesia. Honestly, he was bored with living. That is, until he gets hit by a car and wakes up two weeks later to find out that he's been expelled from his own body by the chirpy, mischievous spirit of a boy named Drew who died four years ago.

With his best friend starving herself to death and his brother determined to figure out his secret, Sean has to find a way to get his body back before he 'fades out of existance'. Except the answer isn't that simple, and Drew may just be the key to his forgotten past.



 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Prologue
Ch. 2 The road to hell is paved with good intentions
Ch. 3 Two plus two equals five
Ch. 4 Just pull your arm out of my bed, would you?
Ch. 5 C'est la vie

Comments

 
Delphinia Fuller Monday, 10 September 2012
I'm impressed with your writing abilities!! I'm excited to see what happens next!!! you are very talented!!!
 
Soul Monday, 3 September 2012
I like this a lot. Really angsty! In my head I'm yelling. 'No, you're fine! Don't do it!' I like stories that I can see in my head, and yours meets this requirement. A suggestion: Put the weight in stones (10 stone 2 pounds) and then add some light calculating on her part, to convert the amount to 142 pounds. It sounds American as is. 1.6 metres?, uh, conversion site, here I come. Sheesh I really need to memorize these.
Keep writing!
 
magicalwriter16 Monday, 26 September 2011
I enjoyed reading so far I will gladly read your other book! If you don't mind could you check out my book. It's called the blind man's cave.
Thanks and good luck your a great writer!
sunshine
 
Sharpie(: Monday, 12 September 2011
Amazing! Just that's all I can say.. Amazing!
 
ThisChick21 Wednesday, 24 August 2011
AMAZING story UHMAZING! I love love love it really! :DD

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