The Cat Story- (Wormkits Siblings and his View)
GenreChildren / Adventure
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Friday, 28 August 2009
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(11 ratings)
Read by:698 different readers
 

Wormkit was a grey and white wom cat with big green eyes. He lived in HollowClan. HollowClan was a group of wildcats that lived in a forest and helped eachother survive.

He had two sisters. Finchpaw, a longhaired ginger tabby with bright and anxious green eyes. She was the most active and outgoing of the whole litter. She was also the prettiest.

The other sister was Sparrowpaw, a silver she-cat with big and calm blue eyes. She was the calmest and shyest of all of Snowfeathers litter.

Please read and comment!

PS

please =)-mrow

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter One
Ch. 2 Chapter Two
Ch. 3 Chapter Three
Ch. 4 Chapter Four
Ch. 5 Chapter Five
Ch. 6 Chapter Six
Ch. 7 Chapter Seven
Ch. 8 Chapter Eight
Ch. 9 Chapter Nine
Ch. 10 Chapter Ten
Ch. 11 Chapter Eleven
Ch. 12 Chapter Twelve
Ch. 13 Chapter Thirteen
Ch. 14 Chapter Fourteen
Ch. 15 Chapter 15
Ch. 16 Chapter Sixteen

Comments

 
LittleWolf Friday, 10 May 2013
you need to make sure you give credit to erin hunter for her story idea, and that you are creating a fanfiction and not claiming this as your sole idea. its an okay story line, it has its interesting parts, however i believe it could be written a bit better
Vivia Strachan Austin Aut Tuesday, 2 October 2012
I started reading and immediately I recall a book I read before about some warrior cats. Some of the comments are suggesting you copied another author's work. You could make the story your own by just being yourself. Let the story come out of yourself and not from someone else. You cannot fool the public. I have seen a lot of areas where your writing needs improving. Don't give up. Keep trying, but before you put your stories out there, do your best to make it as error free as possible. No one is perfect, but at least check your work before you put it out there. Best regards.
 
XxTwilightPrincessxX Saturday, 5 May 2012
lol annie! xD thats mean but lol
Okay Thursday, 28 July 2011
I really like your plot and story..Just amazing
 
Take My Dreams Wednesday, 20 October 2010
As many other people mentioned who read this: it sounds just like the Warriors series -- about a clan of cats. It'd be nice if you gotten your own ideas (you're probably going to object and say it was just an inspiration, but it sounds very alike as well as the odd names, hopefully you're aware) or at least took the ideal of cats and use it as your base but turn it into something else. This has potentional, though, but to be honest it isn't my type of story.

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