Black Flames
GenreChildren / Adventure
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Friday, 7 August 2009
Star rating:
 
(12 ratings)
Read by:292 different readers
 

Shadow was a black wolf, he and his mother Tawna and his brother and sister where cast out of there pack by the leader for his mothers rebelince.

The weather is harsh and the pack seems to be always near, bringing the worry of being attacked from them.

Death seems near amd the only hope of surviving is to reach a hidden valley, plentiful of food and water.

And the valley is farther away than Shadow relizes...

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Proluge
Ch. 1 Shadow
Ch. 2 The Pack
Ch. 3 Chased
Ch. 4 Exiled
Ch. 5 Hunted
Ch. 6 Alone
Ch. 7 Seperate Destinys

Comments

Flamewolf Tuesday, 4 January 2011
Hi Everyone! I've decided to continue the book after almost a year! Hopefully the grammer and spelling will be a bit better ^^"
 
DEACTIVATED Tuesday, 14 December 2010
Very good.
Please update :)
 
Paige Starkey Wednesday, 25 August 2010
Not bad just some tiny little errors. But it's really good. Read and comment on one of mine please?
 
V.P. Boganski Saturday, 2 January 2010
This is really good, but they're are a few minor spelling mistakes - good job I can understand what they mean. Would you mind reading and rating my book?
 
Laurel A. Wright Tuesday, 10 November 2009
okay i wasn't going to say anything but it was getting really annoying. The spelling errors are really distracting. i agree with the other comments in that the idea is great and original but you really need a spellchecker. sorry just trying to be helpful.

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