Unrequited Love
GenreRomance / Drama
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Saturday, 1 August 2009
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(8 ratings)
Read by:353 different readers
 

The Point of View is different than my other story, deal with it. I started writing this story a while back and now I decided to fix it up a bit and post it on here.

Your name is Mitsu Takahashi
Birthday: June 13th
Ethnicity: Japanese
Eye Color: Bright Blue
Hair Color: Black
Body Type: Slim & Slender
Height: 5"6'
Weight: 118 lbs
Likes: Mangas, JDramas, Jpop, Jhip-hop, Sleepovers, Pocky, Strawberry's, Yusuke Yamamoto, Old fashioned clothing of all cultures, stuffed animal bunnies, Cherry Blossoms, Snow, Blood, Snakes and a lot more! :D
Dislikes: Rude people, Cinnamon, Dogs, People who are full of themselves, Rules, Having to use force, or having to fight, Crowds, Buses, Night clubs, Bars, and much more! :D
Stands up for herself and others as much as she can. Believes in love at first sight. Dresses and acts very girly but is more of a tomboy.

You are 16 in 10th grade. The current setting is in Japan in a low run down apartment with your parents and younger sister Rae. Your best friend Ayame lives a floor below you but has more money than you. You have a boyfriend named Hiroshi but he's been seeming so out of it lately he is amongst the hottest guys in your co-ed public school how he ended up with you no one knows but he said its cause of your beauty. You've been dating for about two months and you really think he's the one...But heres where the tragedy starts, also where the story begins.

:D hope you like it :D

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Moving
Ch. 2 New Best Friend
Ch. 3 Tears that needed to be shed
Ch. 4 Feelings can change, right?

Comments

 
Yuna Wednesday, 24 October 2012
This is very original and quite entertaining. Although full of grammar mistakes, it still remains interesting. However, a Japanese family does not show affection this openly. The children are more polite, and parents are extremely demanding, not so “hun” and “kiss on the cheek” as you portrayed them. Aside from Americanised Japanese family, this seems nice.
 
beck harris Monday, 23 July 2012
This sounds a lot like my aunt junko O.O long story short she just married my uncle and might be having a baby
 
Zombie Queen Thursday, 6 January 2011
i love how she used the word baka its funny and really good writing so 5 stars
 
... Tuesday, 25 August 2009
Great flow and detail, are you going to update? This is very unique and its your own I like original stuff!!! Good imagination and pacing to.
 
EminemAddict09 Friday, 14 August 2009
nice. i like the part where she hits whats his face in the face... lol

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