Masochistic Hybrid
GenreYoung Adult / Fantasy
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Tuesday, 28 July 2009
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(7 ratings)
Read by:281 different readers
 

I think Rinata would've been better off if she did not know the secrets of my family. I feel like I've just ripped her apart and burned her body. I won't let her know too much about my family, not anything more. Although I never got to tell her I love her more than a best friend should.
I must kill her and myself before my brother has a chance to. Its not like we have a chance to run away from a vampire.
I revved the engine as Rinata stared at me like I'm Insane. I reached over and grabbed her by the neck and kissed her for the first time. When I pulled away her face was in shock. Then without looking away from her I stepped hard on the pedal into our death.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Secrets
Ch. 2 Not knowing (Rinata Price)

Comments

 
... Tuesday, 25 August 2009
You really draw in the reader with this one, great narration!!!
 
K. Erin Wednesday, 19 August 2009
I like reading but as I'm finding more books I'm having trouble with long chapters. But this looks cool! If you have the time can you read my two books, Innocence and Cinderella? I would appreciat the effort. Thank you

keshia.n
 
AnnmarieM Friday, 31 July 2009
Great start! I like it so far...in a way it reminds me a little of breaking dawn, but that's ok, because the plot's different here and so is the writing style. By the way, love Rin's name. Also very obsessed with Japan/anime/manga, lol.
xxxx

P.S If you could, please can you check out my book as well? thanks
 
Armageddon89 Thursday, 30 July 2009
tehe. Like i said before... PROOF READ! lots... haha. I wuv it though
 
Kathryn Venus Thursday, 30 July 2009
Wow, well written. You drew me in from the start. Keep writing. (:

I would love if you'd read the prologue to my novel? (Drocolo Moonlight)thanks in advance!

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