Angel in the Maze
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Wednesday, 2 April 2008
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Set in a semi-reality at the dawn of electrification, a totalitarian industrialist group called the Architects and their terrifying leader Ramir ban creative output in the city-state of Northbridge. The life of Syrus the harpist, never easy to start with, becomes a living nightmare as the police state tightens around him.


List of chapters

Ch. 1 The end
Ch. 2 Failing and passing
Ch. 3 Ethereal house
Ch. 4 Fanatics and fervour
Ch. 5 Altar of science
Ch. 6 Phase two
Ch. 7 Cadenza
Ch. 8 On the campaign trail
Ch. 9 Politicking
Ch. 10 Mercury madness
Ch. 11 Nagy's party machine
Ch. 12 Chemin-de-fer
Ch. 13 Destroy and reconstruct


Si Coote Wednesday, 2 April 2008
Its very well writtten, 3Jane, and some great care has been taken in editing, well done. I've only read the 1st couple of chapters but, to me, your descriptive writing is your strong point. A little more of this, like scene-setting, and less incidental dialogue would make it more interesting for me, but that's just me! What's your take on mine, 3Jane?

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