White Water
GenreChildren / Adventure
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 13 July 2009
Star rating:
 
(8 ratings)
Read by:472 different readers
 

Jr. was a regular black cat, that is, one with dreams to rule the world. Once his parents pass away Jr. takes his siblings on a wild quest with lots of enchanting friends, including a picky dragon, fish loving cat, and Bob the chicken.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Jr.
Ch. 2 The Dragon Story
Ch. 3 Can I
Ch. 4 Up the chimmney
Ch. 5 Escape
Ch. 6 Out
Ch. 7 Sister with probloms
Ch. 8 Deathly Sick
Ch. 9 Dead
Ch. 10 Dead 2
Ch. 11 Run Aways
Ch. 12 Random Page of nothingness
Ch. 13 Catching Chickens
Ch. 14 The Tower of Torture

Comments

 
Felicity Willow Wednesday, 4 July 2012
It's great! Perfectly hilarious plot/storyline. I just noticed one bit of grammar mistaken. In the first paragraph, I noticed it said 'He had on spot of white on his body' did you mean 'He had one spot of white on his body' hopefully you did, but, the book was great and it covers that mistake. I'll let you off with this one, but I wouldn't like to notice it again, or I'll eat Bob the chicken. Hahaha, great work and happy writing!
Jazz Meyer Monday, 31 May 2010
Very cute and humorous story! I just hope you keep writing. =>
 
Sunny Bunny Florida Sunday, 7 March 2010
Awesome book I love it. Write more!!!
 
China Roses Thursday, 19 November 2009
cute
 
Silverstone Saturday, 29 August 2009
Cute! I think this sounds like a good story for a younger age group? Possibly 8-11. But haha, very good. :) I rate you ten outta ten!!!!!

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