The missing girls
GenreChildren / Mystery
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Saturday, 27 April 2013
Star rating:
(5 ratings)
Read by:363 different readers

Sorry to tell you this but this story is not going to be a very cheerful.This story is going to be about to young girls called Summer who is 10 and Lillian who is 5. they go to the filed to have a picnic and they are alone in the field but the are some strange things happening while they're there.


List of chapters

Ch. 1 The first day
Ch. 2 The creepy filed
Ch. 3 IN the creep dark car with the man
Ch. 4 Charlie and Vicky Smith
Ch. 5 Vicky and Charlie continue
Ch. 6 Vicky and the young police man
Ch. 7 Charlie and the girls
Ch. 8 The big manor house
Ch. 9 The Girls busy week
Ch. 10 The End


stacey2007 Sunday, 24 April 2016
great story????????
merlin Wednesday, 22 January 2014
it was very interesting in some parts
thank you for your lovely story

Lynda Thursday, 13 June 2013
Still waiting to read you next story x
angelicka Friday, 31 May 2013
This story is amazing your talented I hope you write a new story well done :)
angelicka Friday, 31 May 2013
This story has an amazing start I can't wait till the next bit

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