Too Far
GenreSci-Fi / War
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Friday, 8 March 2013
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Read by:146 different readers
 

When the LPS (League of Planets Ship) New Horizons successfully travels through a wormhole, they become the first humans ever to do so. The crew awakens from cryogenic sleep to a world of fire. Outside, two unknown fleets of ships are fighting each other. The head of the security force and an ensign make their way to escape pods and leave the ship, just as it is destroyed.
On the planet, they find a race of friendly aliens called the Petrotique not so diffrent from themselves. The aliens explain to them why they are fighting and tell the humans that without their help, the galaxy as we know it is doomed!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 A Rude Awakening
Ch. 2 A World of Deception

Comments

Jason W Thursday, 21 March 2013
If there is bad grammar or any mispelled words, please tell me.
 
Stephie Tuesday, 12 March 2013
I thought you really know how to write a good story and keep it up! If your intrested go and check out my story it's called My Feet. Tell me what you think.
 
Doss Friday, 8 March 2013
very nice, vast vocabulary added to the personification of the story

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