Something Lost
GenreFantasy / Romance
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Thursday, 6 September 2012
Star rating:
(1 rating)
Read by:278 different readers

Something Lost is a story that revolves around a girl who is naive to the world around her. She finds herself thrust into that world one night and nothing has been the same since. She must take the reins of this new world in hand, with hope in her heart before it controls her...

The story picks up at Chapter 8: A Knight to Remember


List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Begin
Ch. 2 The Elis Sisters
Ch. 3 Regret
Ch. 4 Beautiful Summer
Ch. 5 An Old Question
Ch. 6 The River
Ch. 7 Weightless
Ch. 8 A Knight to Remember
Ch. 9 The Tree
Ch. 10 Golden Cloaks
Ch. 11 Berthold's Lord
Ch. 12 History
Ch. 13 Blue-Eyed Brat
Ch. 14 The Ritual
Ch. 15 The Letter
Ch. 16 Centre Yew
Ch. 17 Centre Yew Lower Dungeon Day 1
Ch. 18 Centre Yew Lower Dungeon Day 2
Ch. 19 Centre Yew Lower Dungeon Day 3
Ch. 20 Empty Handed
Ch. 21 The Artist
Ch. 22 Awkward Talk
Ch. 23 Uncertainty
Ch. 24 Your Smile
Ch. 25 A Dragon's Warning
Ch. 26 Lahre Sari
Ch. 27 Commended
Ch. 28 Sorrow
Ch. 29 Relationship?
Ch. 30 The Burning Forest
Ch. 31 The Hermit Shaman
Ch. 32 Letting Go


Bob Craton Tuesday, 11 September 2012
I like this a lot. The technical details (grammar, spelling, etc.) are impeccable and the story is fascinating. Some people may say it takes too long to get to the 'real' action but I disagree with that. I love the way this builds and how the characters are developed. Many thumbs-up.
Bob Craton Monday, 10 September 2012
You're off to a good start. I'm pressed for time at the moment, but I will come back, read more, and give a proper evaluation.

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