A Reason for Breathing
GenrePoetry / Young Adult
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Saturday, 14 July 2012
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A small collection of my poetry, some are structured, some are free-verse. Written in the first semester of my creative writing class. :)
I'd love some honest criticism and/or opinions!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Hummingbird's Heartbeat - Haiku
Ch. 2 Childhood is... - Free verse
Ch. 3 Just Breathe - Cinquain
Ch. 4 A Poem Is - Free Verse - 2nd Place Poetry Contest Win
Ch. 5 Let Me Sleep - Tonka
Ch. 6 Intimate Conversation- Free Verse
Ch. 7 A Closed Window - Haiku
Ch. 8 Inhale, Exhale - Free Verse
Ch. 9 Unfortunately Metaphorical - Free Verse

Comments

 
Keri Monday, 13 May 2013
All your poems have insipered me and made me think about my own ife. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work with others. My favorites are Exhale and A Poem. :)
 
K. LiCausi Sunday, 4 November 2012
Because I read your other poems, I figured I'd read these two, and guess what? I loved these too! They're fantastic! My English teacher would love you!

I really like the Inhale-Exhale one. Very beautiful.

And your Haikus are so sophisticated and lovely-- the best I've ever come up with is like "Haikus are easy / but sometimes they don't make sense / refridgerator" lol.

:)
 
Julia Grey Monday, 16 July 2012
awesome:) btw thanks for the comments! If your offer still stands, could you help me! Thanks again:p

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