Blue flame
GenreAdventure / Thriller
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Thursday, 12 July 2012
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(2 ratings)
Read by:268 different readers
 

Groups like Starway Enterprises are a dime a dozen. William found the nearest two-bit mercs for hire and now he's in the thick of it.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Loron
Ch. 2 Vacancy
Ch. 3 Abandonment

Comments

 
Steven Cash Monday, 16 July 2012
Pretty good job. Character development is good. Keep writing
 
Steven Cash Monday, 16 July 2012
Nice Start. I'll.read the next chapter as well
 
Abby Vandiver Thursday, 12 July 2012
Very good. You have some grammatical errors that interrupted the flow, but otherwise you're off to a great start. Looking foward to reading more.

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