Ramsden
by Nic
GenreFantasy / War
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Friday, 25 May 2012
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Read by:213 different readers
 

Grabber:
As the last of the Oranium ore was smelted into an ingot, the Blade of Ramsden was almost complete.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Note From Nic
Ch. 1 The Trial of Ramsden
Ch. 2 Crowning of the King
Ch. 3 Unfinished Business
Ch. 4 The Reunion

Comments

K.J.Koops Saturday, 26 May 2012
It's a really great start! Keep up the good work and be sure to post more chapters :D On a side note, I think perhaps where the villagers are raising their hands it should say thirty to forty instead of thirty-forty. Also, I am a little confused by who is the one who is the "I" in "I know I wanted him dead etc etc.." because you reference mary in third person but then change your tense there. This might have been intentional, I'm not sure. In any case, I'm really intrigued!
 
Amanda J. Silberg Friday, 25 May 2012
Sounds interesting!

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cweed Friday, 25 May 2012
Great grabber, great characters, great potential plot! It sounds like a passage out of a Lord of the Rings book. I look forward to reading more of your work, Nic Ward! Publish more chapters soon!

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