Rising Moons (Thanks ImaginationIsKey!)
GenreAdventure / Children
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Saturday, 5 May 2012
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(4 ratings)
Read by:196 different readers
 

Aura was born in Jasper Park Canada as a happy wolf pup, until they came.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Alphas and Omegas

Comments

 
Pin3apple Sunday, 10 June 2012
I loved how u said laughed Aura because it reminds me of a real book and how its description is neatly done.
Well done!!! i'd like to see a bit more description, and looks, smells, the scene etc. But otherwise, i love it! Its really good!:)
Keep writing, this book is extremely good!Btw, wow, the names of thesecharacters remind me of a friend. (imaginationiskey), lol. I love it! Happy Writing:D

Btw, could u check out my book and mayb give it some constructive criticism? Thnx!:)
 
_ShufufleXD_ Thursday, 10 May 2012
We all have unique styles of writing, as I'm good at writing horrors and supernaturals, and your good at those animal ones, not sayig that you do htose baby ones that are like kittens and puppies, you do animal ones that are based on probably 9-15 yrs. :D
 
ImaginationIsKey Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Yay!!!! Thank you so much for choosing my suggestions!!! ^^
 
ImaginationIsKey Tuesday, 8 May 2012
Hi!
Ok first of all, I LOVE this!!!!! I can't wait to read more! I really admire how unique your book is, and I've actually been looking for one like this one.

You do have a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but I do too. So don't worry about it. :) Just copy it onto Word and edit there; something like that.

Lastly, I'm not very good with titles, but some ideas:
-Two halfs (That was actually a name of a short story I intended to write similar to yours, but about humans, one popular, one not, and how they became best friends. I was 8, though)
-Howl (Again, ideas :P)
-Rising Moon (My favorite idea!!!)
-Rising Howl
Again, sorry, just ideas. xP I could probably think of better ones later.

Anyways, love your book, keep writing it!
-ImaginationIsKey

p.s. Could you check out my book; "Run of the Wind"? It does start off kinda boring, sorry! But it gets better. Just tell me what you think, please. Thanks!

Have a great day! :D
 
Steven Cash Sunday, 6 May 2012
If it is a werewolf book name it:
Bewere
Bewerewolf
Or, Pack of Lies

That's all I got

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