The LiGHTER
GenreRomance / Adventure
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Monday, 16 April 2012
Star rating:
 
(11 ratings)
Read by:568 different readers
 

First there is Stephen.
Stephen lived in the regular town of San Francisco. A regular kid, nothing different. Except for the fact of how his mom suddenly disappeared, and how his dad ignores him for no reason. Suddenly Stephen finds himself being pulled in as a lighter who is trying to protect the ones he loves from getting killed by those who are hunting his kind down one by one. He then moves to a different place with his dad, trying to protect themselves so they can live. That is where he meets Sarah.
Sarah is a girl who lives nearby her school. She's a good girl who always followed her father's rules since her parents divorced as a child. The only thing she lives on, is her dad working in a chinese restaurant. Her dad's favorite activity is to hunt lighters, where you could get money off of that. That's when Stephen comes in.
They meet and just when Sarah is finally starting to figure out who Stephen really is, she realizes that her own dad is hunting his kind down, which meant Stephen could end up dead.
Will their love last and she can protect Stephen, or is it just too late?

If more people can rate/comment on my book to give it advice to have more readers that'd b great! Thnx!:)

Chapter 13 coming soon!!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Stephen
Ch. 2 Sarah
Ch. 3 Stephen
Ch. 4 Sarah
Ch. 5 Stephen
Ch. 6 Sarah
Ch. 7 Stephen
Ch. 8 Sarah
Ch. 9 Stephen
Ch. 10 Sarah
Ch. 11 Stephen
Ch. 12 Sarah

Comments

Pin3apple Wednesday, 26 September 2012
Steven Cash- Thank you!!!!:)

-Pin3apple:)
Pin3apple Monday, 3 September 2012
Anya Harris- Hey! Sorry it took me a while to reply to you. If u don't know my laptop is broken, and i have to pause my writing for until Tuesday. I start schl, and i'm really excited because i hav study hall and it's going to give me more of the chances to read/write. I can guarantee more books will come! And i really like your book. Great choice of conflict:)
Keep writing!:)

-Pin3appple:)
Pin3apple Thursday, 9 August 2012
Manda92- Thank you, I'm still not really sure if i'm going to keep the makeout thing the same, but maybe one kiss would definitley work:) Thanks for the advice:)

-Pin3apple:)
 
Manda92 Wednesday, 25 July 2012
I thought it was a nice twist in the conversation. maybe just make the transition to it smoother somehow. like instead of him running over he could make it seem more of a passionate "i cant wait anylonger to kiss her" walk. all in all i love where this is going and i cant wait to read more :)
Pin3apple Sunday, 15 July 2012
Readers- I am not so sure about 7 and 8 with the whole makeout thing. It may b too awkard, message me if u hav any better ideas. Thank you!!!:)

-Pin3apple:)

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