Siren
GenreThriller / Fantasy
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Thursday, 12 April 2012
Star rating:
 
(1 rating)
Read by:320 different readers
 

Lake Ashland, home to the quiet, the busy and the weird.

With parents who only seem to have eyes for their firstborn, Selyne Coltson- the youngest- feels ignored. It doesn't help that they are moving to a new state to be closer to her older sister.

Jensen Reyes grew up as the middle child in a family of hunters. Just not your average hunters, the kind to exterminate the supernatural. As if high school weren't bad enough he has to kill monsters.

Something is about to threaten the lives of everyone in town, and no one knows what it is..

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 New in town..
Ch. 2 Welcome to High School!
Ch. 3 So it Begins..
Ch. 4 Names that Start with N.

Comments

Ka hona Sunday, 27 January 2013
plz post im in luvvv!!!!!!!!!!... with this book:)
Taylor.Rae Friday, 13 April 2012
Thanks! I'm a horrible editor, which is obvious. I usually just scan when I go over my work, bad habit. But again thank you, constructive criticism is always welcome!
 
Bob Craton Friday, 13 April 2012
Overall, this beginning is definitely above average. There are a few typos and some places where the sentence structure could be revised. Mentioning that Selyne's parents were in the moving truck ahead of her might make the first couple of paragraphs clearer. However, I think imagination is more important than details. I suggest you write some more first then go back and fix the small stuff.
I watch for new postings in the fantasy genre (and sci-fi) because I am also a new author and I like to see what others are doing. Like everyone else on this website, I have books of my own posted and I hope to share opinions.

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