How the Lion got his main
GenreChildren / Adventure
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Saturday, 10 March 2012
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(4 ratings)
Read by:343 different readers
 

A short story on how the lion got his main (Spelling will be edited later.)

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 How the Lion got his Main

Comments

 
_ShufufleXD_ Wednesday, 23 May 2012
Good story!
Can you read mine? its not named yet
 
_ShufufleXD_ Wednesday, 23 May 2012
Good story!
Can you read mine? its not named yet
 
Lady Coldfeather Friday, 27 April 2012
Once your actual writing, spelling, grammar and punctuation is proof-read and edited, this could be really lovely. It is very well put together, and the moral of the story is something old and something new both at once - it's refreshing and original, and I would love reading this to my nieces.
Good job :)
 
Steven Cash Saturday, 21 April 2012
Maine=State in North East
Main=The first, most important or used
Mane=The hair around a male lion's neck

Try not to confuse the 3

Pretty good story
 
K.Beard Saturday, 10 March 2012
I really like this story--it strikes at the heart of the difference between what we think God wants from us, and what He really wants!
You do need to do some editing--those last four paragraphs are particularly confusing. I'm looking forward to reading the finished product--i think my Sunday School class might like it!

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