The Bad Guys Are Winning
GenreYoung Adult / History
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 1 June 2009
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(5 ratings)
Read by:260 different readers
 

Shops are being closed down by the Nazis, shops that are owned by Jews. Crissy discovers that her mom is hiding Jews so they can escape. If the Germans find out the entire family will be in danger.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologe
Ch. 1 Warnings
Ch. 2 Where?
Ch. 3 The Truth

Comments

Colleen Miller Friday, 4 December 2009
Actually Alissa people did escape form FRANCE into Spain, I read a book about it last year. I'll totally ask you for Spainish stuff but a little later. They're staying in France for a little while :)
 
Alissa Ryan Thursday, 3 December 2009
Still great! But by the way usually it wasn't Spain that Jews were sent to. Usually they were sent to... Switzerland I believe. Or maybe Sweden. But that's not a big deal, whatever. Just mentioning. And you remember I did Spain as my country for the report last year and I'm taking Spanish now so if you need any info on Spain just ask me at school or email me or something.
There's some grammatical errors but not a big deal. If you want I can edit it. Just email me the whole document that you have this whole story in and I'll just go ahead and edit the whole thing. No cost of course, you're my best friend :)
 
Molly Williams Monday, 12 October 2009
This is cool! I love the idea. Yeah, you need some editing and stuff but who cares? It still has hooked me!!

I was wondering if you could check out my book "Half"? I only started on this website yesterday and I'd love to get more reviews and ratings. It would be extremely appreciated. I definitely understand the difficulty of trying to get reviews; I used to be on this website about a year ago but I got rid of my account because no one was reading my work!

Thanks,
Molly Williams
 
AnnmarieM Friday, 7 August 2009
it's a good start, and some nice dialouge, but I agree that maybe editing and just correcting and few grammar mistakes would help make the story flow more. But, even so, I still enjoyed reading it. Good work!

xxx
P.S If you have time, do you think you could check out my work as well? thanks
 
littlemissSmileZ Sunday, 5 July 2009
This is pretty good, but you really really need to edit.
When you edit it, contact me so that I can read it over.

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