One of the Boys
GenreDrama / Romance
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 19 August 2011
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Read by:120 different readers
 

"Fuck you Adrian" Scarlet grumbled.

"When?"

"never"

"Okay, Where?" Adrian revealed his annoying sexy smirk.

"shut the hell up dipshit" replied an agitated looking Scarlet.

"oh, you like to talk dirty?"

"........."

" I won't tell people we're friends with benefits," Adrian winked and Scarlet punched him in the arm.

"I am not fucking you dumbass!"

"Owe! God damn it Scar you hit like a guy."

"Adrian, haven't you heard? I'm one of the
boys."

 

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Comments

MaddieBear c: Saturday, 27 July 2013
I appreciate your honesty. I will defiantly try to edit it when I have some free time.
 
Pseudonym Thursday, 25 July 2013
The first thing that jumped right out at me was your grammar. It's not good. You definitely need to improve here. Also, the fact that you didn't put any description as to who said what and how made for a very dull start. The cursing pulled right away for me, it seemed immature almost. You have a lot to work on, but keep going, okay? It's a good story line, and with lots of practice, you'll be fantastic. I apologize if I was harsh. I try to be as honest as possible.

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