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Savanna Ripley has basically been alienated by her former best friend and former boyfriend. Her ex-boyfriend's girlfriend has been pretending to be her friend, when she was really just spreading lies to make her own self look better. Now that most of her friends, let alone the whole school, doesn't trust her or the things she says, it's going to be very difficult to regain her self-worth back. Especially when she has a bunch of girls who hate her guts trying to ruin her life. List of chapters Comments
jjtangster
Monday, 14 January 2013
This is really interesting. I love your use of language! excellent! :)
Wow, and who are you to judge, Bex? I thought this was incredibley good? But, each to their own, I suppose. It still isn't fair of you to be so scornful!
Take out the "Spring", this is just pure Nausea.
Read books, real books, they don't remotely resemble this. Read books about writing techniques, take classes.
awesome!!!!
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